Give me a break.

Give me a break.

A Poem by Sammypookins
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Written for a fairy contest, Fun Fun Fun.

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Dear boss,

They eat too much sugar,
And their teeth are a state.
I’m in need of a holiday,
Or at least a short break.
I am almost worn out.
My poor wings are all tattered.
I have too much to do,
Believe me I’m shattered.
I want a week on an island.
Just sun sand and sea,
A place with no children,
Just a good book and me.
All the wine I can drink,
A whole week of peace,
Some respite, some rest
And definitely no teeth.

Regards Tooth fairy (The)

© 2008 Sammypookins


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This is a wonderful humorous tooth fairy. Very enjoyable..

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 17 Years Ago


Can I borrow this to send to my boss? I couldn't say it any better.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent, Sweet, (a much maligned word these days) almost a monologue in the style of the great Marriot Edgar. Regards Ken.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a great poem
so original, so new, so.. refreshing!!!
thanks for sharing
I love it, it's beautifully written xxooxx

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HA!!! very clever and readable Sammy. Fancy you choosing the tooth Fairy! I would have thought you'd go for the stinky foot fairy!
Hope you win...who's the boss you're writing to? King of the fairies????

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so cute!
I wish I was a fairy and off on a holiday like that!!
Nice flow and yes, i can imagine the poor fairy is
exhausted!


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sammypookins
Sammypookins

Birmingham U.K, United Kingdom



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