Alone

Alone 
Alone with you 
Hearing screaming 
As I watched you slowly die 
Reaching for me 
I couldn’t help 
Forgive me 
Fragile longings 
In your words 
But I can’t help you 
You whispered 
I listened 
To your words 
Of despair 
And now your 
My only reason 
To give up 
I watched you bury yourself alive 
Burning in the infernal wicked darkness 
I promised myself 
Tears wouldn’t come 
Only darkness can come 
And take me 
Away to it beautiful world 

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

tHIS POEM HAS A DARK UNDERTONE.

BUT I GUESS YOU GOT YOUR OWN REASONS

[Owlgirl]

Emotional poem! Lovely! At the end in the last line I wasn't sure what you meant with "Away to it beautiful world", my only suggestion is to change "it" to a more descriptive word like "the" maybe? I'm not sure, it goes with your emotions :) Other than that, I love it! Nice flow.