Death

Now I see through Blind eyes

Nothing can take me away

Yet they tell me that you’re gone

But their all lies

Oh why couldn’t you tell the truth?

You told me you never leave me

Now here I am lying on your stone cold grave

Haunting me in my dreams

I don’t want to let go

Don’t want let my sorrow leave

Want you stay by my side

Even though you are cold in the ground

I will love forever more

You are my drug

I am addicted to

I can’t let go

Your voice calls me

No please don’t let go

I want to hear the last whispers of your voice

Screaming till my voice is hoarse

Only you can save me

From a certain death

Save me from the brimming fire of hell

Take me away to your

 Heaven of Death

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a quite haunting poem.

In the last line ' Heaven of death',
in poetry, this is what is called an oxymoron.
That is when you coin two words that contradict each other.
It is similar to a paradox.
But oxymoron is the coining of contradictory words like HEAVENLY HELL
This can be used for specific effect.
But it depends in which context an oxymoron is used.


GOOD POEM

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was really good. You captured the truith of how even when someone says they wll never leave they still ultamately do. Great piece

[Owlgirl]

Wow, this is haunting and enchanting and it has a great flow. Exceptional word choices, amazing and suspensful. Beautiful and capturing.