souls

She walks slowly into

Something unknown

Yet she fears and

Is not afraid

What she sees

May be light or maybe darkness

Which path she chooses can lead

To her destruction

Or her salvation

Blood stains the road of those who walked

Along the light

Yet the questions

Remains

To be frozen in time

Watching those who you love cut down

By your hand

By your choice

Pity in your heart

Glee in your smile

Darkness in your eyes

The things you say

The things you do

Tears cried for you

Disgraced to the depths of hell

Bottomless hole

Screaming sounds

Deafening sounds

Death comes to haunt you

Take your soul

In repentance for those

Who died

Salvation is lost to you

Only darkness

Awaits

Only a never-ending torture

Comes for you

Screaming souls

Screaming demons  

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

A VERY DARK MOOD.

I WONDER IF THIS IS SIMPLY A POETIC CHARACTER
OR A REFLECTION OF YOU AS A PERSON.

YOU DEFINITELY ARE IN TOUCH WITH THE DARK SIDE OF THINGS

BUT IT'S GOOD TO LEARN TO BE VERSATILE AS A POET.
YOU HAVE TO ALSO SHOW OTHER MOODS,
ANOTHER LIGHTER SIDE OG YOUR PERSONALITY

[Lumière Dé..]

Pity in your heart
Glee in your smile
Darkness in your eyes

Love that. The discriptions in this are amazing! I get the feeling that this person, who has done so many wrongs is almost... happy about it. Like all the pain they caused is nothing to them. Great write :)

[that-little-green-monst..]

Love this! I love the last two lines. Great job!