Why I ask you? Why do you enjoy my pain? Twisting my arm to do you’re bidding Slowly you want to break me Laughing your evil laugh You tell me I can never escape Crawling back to freedom Takes so much of me Slowly the bruises in my heart can never heal You will always be there Whispering in my ear You can run But never hide You are my snow white queen You never know your words haunted me I can’t escape the twisted ways You think of me Wake up in a dream Frozen fear All your hands on me You belong to me My snow white queen I hear You’re just like me Don’t scream anymore my love All I want is you I can’t save your life You stand there as I bleed Watching as my world divides Hiding in the dark from you
After reading all 7 of your published poems, I came back to this one. Ticking and Broken Smile are also nicely done. The agony of protagonists’ emotions…can leave you in an emotional conundrum. Only we can control our flight…I find the writers expressions easy read and to relate to as the process the emotional darkness manifests self discovery and understanding…Nicely penned Lily, I'll need to pay more attention to your writing
After reading all 7 of your published poems, I came back to this one. Ticking and Broken Smile are also nicely done. The agony of protagonists’ emotions…can leave you in an emotional conundrum. Only we can control our flight…I find the writers expressions easy read and to relate to as the process the emotional darkness manifests self discovery and understanding…Nicely penned Lily, I'll need to pay more attention to your writing
Haha I just posted a poem called Snow White! What're the odds? Anyways this is a wonderful poem. I was immediately attracted to this poem because of the title and the read didn't disappoint! It's so beautiful!