Broken smile

Broken smile

A Poem by Lily

Watching cars go by 
A million thoughts go through my mind 
With a grim look on my face 
Tears threaten to come 
I blink to hold them back 
Sometimes 
Time goes by so slowly 
Knowing each day 
Nothing can make me smile 
Wondering why I bother 
Feeling so down 
No one knows 
What I’m feeling 
All they see is the broken smile 
I put on my face 
I try so hard to continue 
This masquerade 
Waking each day 
To a life I regret 
All I can think 
Is why my tears try 
So hard to fall on my face 
My painful sobs I try to hide 
Hurting so much 
I never new 
How the shards of my pain 
Could cut so deeply 
Running away from the darkness 
Behind me 
Having no hope 
At all 
Becoming something 
I promised myself 
I never be 
Emotionless  

© 2012 Lily


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This is a great piece because I can relate to every single word that was written. Smiles are easy to form, but underneath you can't see what people are feeling. Even if I smile and laugh deep inside something is hurting me...and no one can ever see it. This poem ends on a strong note..but it is sad to be emotionless. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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EVEN WHEN SOCIETY SEEM WILD
DON'T LET IT STEAL YOUR SMILE

YOU WERE ONCE A BABY-CHILD
SO NOW WHY LOSE YOUR SMILE?

EVEN YOUR CHOSEN LIFESTYLE
HAS NO RIGHT TO STEAL YOUR SMILE

THOUGH THE JOURNEY IS FOR MANY MILES
YOU DISPLAY JUST AS MANY SMILES :)
:)
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great piece because I can relate to every single word that was written. Smiles are easy to form, but underneath you can't see what people are feeling. Even if I smile and laugh deep inside something is hurting me...and no one can ever see it. This poem ends on a strong note..but it is sad to be emotionless. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very moving poem. One thing I can say is that I know how you feel better than you think I do. If you want proof you should check out some of my poems they will not only prove it to you they will help. Keep up the good writing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lily
Lily

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