Blood melody

The melody play's on 
A neverending heartache 
Playing upon my soul 
Crying alone 
Can you not see my tears 
Oh don't leave me here 
When everything I have is lost 
I've Forgotten a part of myself 
There's nothing to lose anymore 
Melodies play on 
Awaiting another victim 
Another sacrfice 
Burning bright 
Blazing through 
Tears falling feeding 
The hungry flames 
Breaking me  
Taking away my dreams 
Cutting off my wings 
My heart my soul 
Been though so much 
Lying down 
In the blood red 
World 
Closing eyes 
Last breath 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Some parts might need a little editing, where one part begins another continues, but the flow still worked and the imagery sharp.