Effect me

well, the thoughts i come across..
always seem to keep me down.
always thinking depressents..
only things that come around.
i know i'm pretty blessed..
and i know this from around.
but sometimes neglected,,, 
..can't help my mind from feeling down.
i see some signs of which i found 
i saw my future from the ground
i just come-up with tears from clouds
i come from nuthing but moms vows
i can't forget my dads around
good memories placed their bestowed
a couple curve balls but more fouls
this all effects me even now
just live my life, sadness is found
but for the better, stronger now
and yet these morals leave a sound
sounds in my head i get around
but for the worst effects me now
untill the hurse drives under clouds

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[Buddhistboy73]

Deep.....Like the way you conjure up great imagery on this piece...."always thinking depressants".....and at the same time managing to acknowledge your blessings....good use of rhyming here too...this poem strikes a large chord with me...and I'm sure many others out there.....good to hear your words fella...