my problem

i'm feelin kinda sick..
i'm feelin kinda nautious..
i have badd anxietyy.
i have ideas of how i got this.
stress is all inside of me.. 
so i've tried there ain't no stoppinn.
wish i chould just feel soo free..
..get backk to the wayy i started.
but so on it never leaves..
now my socialness departingg..
oh the things this problem theives..
some things it prevents from starting.
 

Reviews

[AMP]

This one read much better. More variety in the pattern entertains and engages the readers. Still though, this could be a song and a good one. It's almost like a life verse. Like some sort of inscription left behind on a tombstone or even in the cover a journal as a hint or reminder of the spirit of the person owning it. Almost a cry, and yet, too light hearted for that. Very interesting. I enjoyed this one.