no where, now here ... .. .

just an effort to express myself through words ...

no where, now here ... .. .

nowhere, now here..... i sit by my window and begin to write sitting inside the empty room, wind blowing inside echoing between my ears. an empty air hits my face, it was a lonely dark night and deathly quite. lightening and thundering yet the silent rains outside my window shares the moment of it's past.

the silent rains today, have betrayed the emotions of my poetry, just like those enemies disguised as freinds in the past who pretended to be one of me. today i feel they are still in me, but i am one among many yet belonging to none.

i don't know if i am suppose to fight the emptiness in me or i just let it be. writing a few lines seems difficult tonight, so much in my heart so much in my mind but nothing seems to be right. today i am really not sure what i should write, my rhymes are fading and everything's sound the same to me.

nowhere, now here..... so much to write yet empty inside, my thoughts are shrinking and lines are fading. i have locked myself in my own self made prison, the prison is in my head.

nowhere, now here .... ... .. .

sAM

Reviews

[Mary]

Hi there :)

Spelling of lightning, friends.

I'm not sure if I would include rhyme in your poem, unless you were thinking of this piece as lyrics.

You've got an interesting subject matter here and I think if you played with it some more, it would turn out to be something you're proud of writing.