Tousled Feelings

For that special someone...

With tousled hair and a bashful smile

A sense of clarity is given on something unknown to me

Something foreign, an infection given by charisma?

Something warm, perhaps an elevation of the heart?

Whatever the case, I can feel it growing

How the need of proclamation claws at me

My name in a spotlight with yours beside

While we wave to the envy of onlookers

Or for the covers to envelop us

As we fall down the hole into our own wonderland

No wonder we preach about this everyday

The prize that seems to always be falunted about

As if we're the winners of a hard fought clash

And the reward is ours to take in pride

Whether time will pass and possesion is lost

For right now, you make every bit count

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome piece buddy. You captured your feelings and put them into words beautifully... good work!

[SammMG]

Thank you very much Aaron. I just try to get what I feel.

[~]

Ahhh.. this poem definitely dazzles!!!! sparkling and just beautiful feelings. I love it. It got me captured within each line elevating with your feelings of excitement!!
lucky one!! :D

[SammMG]

It's such a relatable feeling. Glad to know I could dazzle you. :)