Notes Of Love

Deep love thoughts

 

Notes Of Love/Sami Khalil

These words are thoughts, which blossom within my heart,

are also the roses left for you to pick and keep.

I have realized that we never appreciate the seasons of our lives

until it dawns on us that they have escaped our grasp;

For all things have fragility in life, except true love,

it grows stronger by time’s passing.

And all things are mortal, but if I have to live indefinitely,

I would live in a dream which would connect your soul

to mine, without the chaos of our world.

I have rejected all yesteryear's for you longing

 

and hoping for a future dream together.

I also have hoped that in the wee hours,

your illuminated shadow,

will overcome my darkness with a sunrise.

Even if the sun sets over its lonely hill

giving way to a black coal sky,

you can still see the dreamer in me.

And if we are afraid to show this love know that light

will dissipate any darkness or fear.

For this silent love of mine might go unnoticed

but it will always bring a surprise to light.

I have concluded that all things have secrets

except a shared heart,

it whispers love phrases in the open.

I also have found out that it takes a soft breath

to start a fire, just as you started an invisible one within.

And if it takes ink to write love letters, I would rather write

them with my blood flow.

And if I bleed to death, I know that death can change

the mortal moments but not our eternity.

Reviews

[Érenn]

Well I am a curious guy always out there reading all sorts of writes. So today I end up visiting your page. And it was a delight. I always read an initial work of a writer to begin with. ^^ First thoughts on the poem itself. I love the structure and the flow that is maintained throughout the poem is superb. Credit goes to the fine vocabulary you have displayed here. I must also add that they a good job in invoking vivid imagery. This write packed quite the punch. I loved the tone that changes ever so slightly in intervals as the poem proceeds further down. You have expressed a lot of phases and the end had definitely is one I would call fitting. People have already expressed and interpreted about the write here. I understand it as well. Just thought I would share my views on how the flow and tones felt to me as I read it. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[Jack...]

Sami, your pen is flowing love and it is so beautiful. Very nice my friend. My heart smiles when I read something like this.

[Cerise]

Very beautifully written...your girl is gonna b very lucky and incase u have one she sure is lucky to have u...very touching..fantastic work

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my you just get better and better my dear Sami .This is so romantic and utterly lovely :)

[Johanna]

Wow.. so emotional.. deepest thoughts of the heart and soul, beautiful piece!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"death can change the mortal moments but not our eternity." The same way your poem will be loved till eternity.
Enchanted.......!

[Neon]

All things have fragility in life except true love, it grows stronger by time’s passing.
An interesting line to read, the poem's good, it's a bit sentimental but strong as well. I liked the theme that's based on reality .. on today's life.

[Diana]

"I also have found out that it takes a soft breath to start a fire just as you started an invisible one within." Those who move us most are often kind and gentle, not the "pushy" motivators people so often mistake for real motivators. (I'm not entirely sure if that relates, but that's what came to mind.)

"And if I bleed to death, I know that death can change the mortal moments but not our eternity." Wow.

I like this side of your writing.

[NeiL ArandA]

Its really and truly amazing indeed.
Poetry is the universal language of the heart .
It spills from the cracks of a broken heart
And flows from the one that has loved.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like your analogy between the, 'darkness of fear' and 'the black coal sky', the whole poem in actual fact is very deep and engaging, slightly disturbing in the end though your writing reigns with philosophy. A real survivors, stance come's though, immaculate.