Notes Of Love

Deep love thoughts

 

Notes Of Love/Sami Khalil

These words are thoughts, which blossom within my heart,

are also the roses left for you to pick and keep.

I have realized that we never appreciate the seasons of our lives

until it dawns on us that they have escaped our grasp;

For all things have fragility in life, except true love,

it grows stronger by time’s passing.

And all things are mortal, but if I have to live indefinitely,

I would live in a dream which would connect your soul

to mine, without the chaos of our world.

I have rejected all yesteryear's for you longing

 

and hoping for a future dream together.

I also have hoped that in the wee hours,

your illuminated shadow,

will overcome my darkness with a sunrise.

Even if the sun sets over its lonely hill

giving way to a black coal sky,

you can still see the dreamer in me.

And if we are afraid to show this love know that light

will dissipate any darkness or fear.

For this silent love of mine might go unnoticed

but it will always bring a surprise to light.

I have concluded that all things have secrets

except a shared heart,

it whispers love phrases in the open.

I also have found out that it takes a soft breath

to start a fire, just as you started an invisible one within.

And if it takes ink to write love letters, I would rather write

them with my blood flow.

And if I bleed to death, I know that death can change

the mortal moments but not our eternity.

Reviews

[Érenn]

Well I am a curious guy always out there reading all sorts of writes. So today I end up visiting your page. And it was a delight. I always read an initial work of a writer to begin with. ^^ First thoughts on the poem itself. I love the structure and the flow that is maintained throughout the poem is superb. Credit goes to the fine vocabulary you have displayed here. I must also add that they a good job in invoking vivid imagery. This write packed quite the punch. I loved the tone that changes ever so slightly in intervals as the poem proceeds further down. You have expressed a lot of phases and the end had definitely is one I would call fitting. People have already expressed and interpreted about the write here. I understand it as well. Just thought I would share my views on how the flow and tones felt to me as I read it. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[mou]

A very pleasant write!!
You have an excellent talent to express the thoughts with some incredible words.
Keep up great write.
Many thanks for sharing.

[Ruth]

This was a sheer delight Sami...I read it twice and each time was a unique experience...just superb :)

[Indra Neil]

WOW! kudos for composing such a poetic masterpiece!
definitely one among the best I have ever read! *claps*

[Saddam]

Its a kind of masterpiece that can not be written again but could not stop reading it.
Marvelous piece Beloved Sir.

[Shane Mohamed]

It's the kind of poem that you keep reading to find out more. The end is what captured it for me and made it all resound; how a lover is willing to bleed to write to his better half. It was very romantic. I truly regret not having come by this any time sooner. It was a delight. I'm never disappointed. Thank you Sami.

[Jimmy Yetts]

This exquisite creation goes beyond portraying mere romance; it is an eloquent declaration of profoundly pure love.
Such a love--if fearlessly and faithfully embraced--may well be impervious to death.
What an incredibly lovely "life preserver" you've fashioned, here, good poet!

[LadyAnn68]

You can feel several emotions in this one, as the dreamer's vision of his dream coming true...the unbound love that is connected by shared common ground of both hearts. Amazing!

[Valentine]

Whew, I would choose this poem to read when I have been looking at picture albums of my husband. Sad memories. Valentine

[Renée]

Mr. Khalil… I am speechless.
I have read it out loud twice, you bring tear to my eyes with the beauty of this love. How blessed be near, or far your loved one, to receive such a tender musing of your heart !
Thank YOU for sharing this part of your heart's expressions with us !