Still the Queen

Happens to lots of men especially in some countries... Thus is not about me, but I have seen it happens. Rejection is devastating.

Still the Queen                by Sami Khalil

An English Sonnet...

 

For days on end, I waited patiently

Dawdled I did for a timely moment

A ring in hand to offer graciously

Under a leafy tree through bestowment.

 

On terra-cotta tiles, your dad heard steps

Like police boots and heart roaring in fire

In his rocking wood chair, he showed biceps

As the clock melted in dreadful ire.

 

A resounding “No” made no sense to me

Dashing hopes when failed to impress his kind

The butter-fly flew past the glib and glee

For no bells will be heard in anchored bind.

 

I stood back then watching the gulf between

Till two horizons meet, you're still the queen.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Still the Queen, yes indeed as should. Whatever a person's status or being, the heart is much the same.. is what makes a human human.. what makes love and duty, trust and sincerity and all those traits that turns a person into who he or she is inside, in spirit and thought - unique. Your words could be interpreted in so many ways.. finely laid, sir.

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. You have summed it up marvelously. You are unique in your own ways. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us.

[emmajoygreen]

Thank you for such a kind reaction, sir. Smiles me into another day!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Emmajoygreen.

[Amy R]

Lovely poem, imagery and language used made this one a bit more special.

The "butter-fly" serves as a metaphor for fleeting joy and the ephemeral nature of love.

The clock described as "melting in dreadful ire," which gives it human-like qualities, enhancing the sense of urgency and despair.

The ring symbolizes commitment and the desire for union, while the "gulf between" signifies the emotional and physical distance created by opposition.

VERY WELL WRITTEN💯
-Amy

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. You are right on the money. Thank you so much. See you soon.

[Amy R]

You're welcome , have a lovely weekend.

[Sami Khalil]

You too. Gracie mille.

[redd Brick Keshner]

We are taught and sometimes even trained and our appetites whetted to succeed in every endeavour, including matters of the heart, but rarely ever to navigate and survive disappointments, defeat and rejection which can be far more devastating and commonplace. If only life could be just a tad easier…. Compelling read and truths in this rich poem.

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well articulated dear poet and friend; you have summed it up marvelously. Thank you so much for taking the time and spending the effort.
HNY

[redd Brick Keshner]

. . . 🙏🏻

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr
Gracie Mille

[Beren]

It's very touching, sincere and makes me feel close. I want to idolize your writings and set aside a day to read them all from beginning to end. Perfect narration.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! That will be an honor. Take your time. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Better a queen unconquered than a willing handmaid could have been the motto of many of Elizabeth Tudor's suitors. The heartaches and rejection hurt but do not relinquish or deplenish the feelings of loyalty to love. I enjoyed the read.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree wholeheartedly dear poet and friend. You have summed it up marvelously. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us.

[Patricia Wedel]

The Queen of Hearts... will always be heard in the Symphonies of her Life... Quietly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts on this subject.
Nothing like a good symphony.

[Beccy]

Under the skin we are exactly the same in every way; so how strange it is that we have formulated so many different social beliefs, attitudes, approaches and behaviours.

Times may change, but underlying beliefs have never moved at the same speed.

Beccy.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us Beccy; what you say is absolutely true; I guess some traditions, beliefs, norms stay changeless in a changing world.
Social pressures, religious pressures and family pressures can be powerful and effective.

[Sami Khalil]

Societal pressures

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. I love it.

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this wonderful review and summation.
Be blessed.

[Ken Simm.]

Full of so much. Whimsy, pathos and honesty. I simply love this memorial poem.

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this wonderful review and sharing. Glad you like it.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i admire how the restrained and composed way you wrote this. this is an experience that one will never recover from, but the humble and often humorous way this was written shows the persona's perseverence. a tragic ending, but still quirky. it seems you haven't lost your sense of humour.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe! So true and well observed. You are astute indeed. Thank you so much Ern for this wonderful review.
Glad you like it.