Vulnerable

Vulnerable

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A prose poem...

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Vulnerable                   by Sami Khalil

Prose poem…


 

I walk the stages: Vulnerable, portentous, anxious; memories spread out like counterpanes.

 

A sense of agitation engulfs my mind.

A feeling of dread unravels my being.

A rolling of waves caresses my edges.

 

I sense an emotional “dueling” burgeoning upon this heart,

stripped of swords and shields.

 

Flowery languages suffice not to show the pangs, the fears, the innermost hurts.

 

I need peace, trust, patience and courage to remove the barricades, to offer a certain stillness between spaces,

to bestow a gentle calm to the transgression of chaotic souls, to publish the gothic pages of unspoken things.

 

Tonight, I bide in vulnerability: An impetuous, unfair trade between weakness and strength.

© 2024 Sami Khalil


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Sami let me put your mind to ease and say this. Vulnerability is often misunderstood as a weakness, but in reality, it is a profound strength. To be vulnerable is to show courage—the courage to be open, to trust,

True strength lies in embracing vulnerability, because it is in that space we discover our authenticity and the capacity for meaningful growth. You have traded strength for strength of a different kind.

Well done yet again.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Wow! I can't agree more with you dear poet and friend. You have summed it up marvelously. All these .. read more
Hmmm? 🤔

Well, Sami,
First-off, it certainly is unpleasant to disagree with such an accomplished artist, as yourself, but I do not find this piece to be language written or spoken in its ordinary form, plain or dully written discourse or expression, or speaking tediously … all of which is Prose.
What I do believe is that this piece is a splendid example of Free Verse poetry, with rhythm, flow, strong emotional timbre, creative metaphor, syntactic wonder, spot-on punctuation, etc; etc; etc.
Could it be formatted and presented more poetically? Yes, but every nuance of stellar Free Verse is present.
Please, excuse my critique … I just felt it needed said.

Now,
Having said all that, let me say how personally relatable in feeling and emotion this poem epitomizes me … been there, done that … alas, more than once, and it ain't all that easy to overcome.
"Envious" describes my inner reaction upon reading through each and every creatively original line.
Grrreat title and artwork choice, too.

I could proceed, Sami, but lest I wear my welcome thin, I'll close with a sincere thank you for sharing your fine poetic skill with us all, at The Café! ⁓ Richard🖌

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Wow! Coming from the worthy bard , who is spearheading creativity, is an honor and privilege to say .. read more
we all experience inner struggles during our lifetime.... it is a space which can take away our breath, a space we strive to exit....a space of extreme vulnerability....we don't want to aggravate it further...considering this uncomfortable "in between" we can hope for better days...
well done Sami....
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

A pleasure, always🌷
Warmly, B
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

:::::))))))))))))
"An impetuous, unfair trade between weakness and strength." The closing gave me hope as I'm battling within this very space. At times, strength is the forgotten companion, but a companion nonetheless. Thank you.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

So true and well articulated. Glad you are fighting the good fight. I do too. Thank you kindly for .. read more
Powerful write, it reflects a lot on how personal experiences often comes with many inner struggles and vulnerability. I pondered a little on this topic, since many of us face such in this world.

Here you reminded us that we need peace, trust, and courage to navigate through these feelings.
Nice poem.

-Amy

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wow! I totally agree dear poet and friend; we sure need them to navigate this harsh, heartless world.. read more
Amy R

5 Months Ago

Aww glad to share my view.
You're welcome. ☺️
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

::::::)))))))))))))
dear Sami… Impetuous is one of my favorite words… I am Vulnerable at times. I feel this is a Poem that describes the feelings we are experiencing now in a more Serious situation
With our Country and World in turmoil. Wishing you a lovely day with Sunshine and Hope and prosperity for the future, gently, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

I agree wholeheartedly: we all are experiencing powerful events and hopefully we can preserve oursel.. read more
Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

dearest Sami… we realize how Fragile Life can be. Every day I am in Awe that so many talented Pe.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us.
Good afternoon - only six minutes ago, dear friend. As often you gently take a worry or sadness,
vulnerability or whatever - pat it, think it then - put it into buoyant words. That way of dealing with problems or hurt helps to release tension, regain energy and all the necessities a human being needs. There are more than enough problems in our place in space to allow aggravations wriggle their way into our day to day lives. Bless your logic and kindness, dear Sami. Many, many thanks.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

OMG! So true and well articulated; beautiful and wise words you shared. I thank you for taking the t.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Note: One or 2 of your poems I can't review for they lack review boxes; could be glitches.
This prose is so beautifully worded Sami and describes vulnerability in a way that many will relate. Your fourth stanza stood out in its excellence and spoke to me personally. A wonderful piece. Kudos.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wowzy woooo! I love it when people feel a writing and can relate; we are all vulnerable human beings.. read more
Maybe the more we know the more vulnerable we become. I suppose we can use our strengths to overcome our weaknesses as they say confront fear and fear loses its hold on you, something like that . Anyway an excellent write Sami to ponder on.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. I wholeheartedly agree. Lots of people are .. read more
This poem depicts true portrait of being vulnerable. Poet succeeded in every measure to lead the reader to the real world of the emotion. If one can keep the head above water in those stages the real courage comes afterwards is unparallel at least to few people, congrats on this piece of writing Sami Khalil the great author of poem Bereft

Posted 5 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

Wow! Coming from you is a true honor; I'm glad you still remember my poem 'Bereft'. Thank you kindly.. read more
Linda alexander

5 Months Ago

I really liked that poem no wonder it comes to me spontaneously,
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

All wonderful. Thank you kindly for liking and all the support.

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