Signs

She loves me, she loves me not...

Signs                       by Sami Khalil

Miles precede milestones

Waves presage crashes

Births lead to deaths

Blooms before withering

Sceneries forgo travelers

 Sleeps succeed awakenings

Writings foreshadow readings

Parents usher in children

Roots give way to branches

Idles introduce movements

Readiness prior to changes

Youngsters in advance of the elderly

Dreams guide actions

Chaos antecede order

Inner beings preface the outer

Kingdoms come before crowns

Unknowns pioneer the knowns

Weaknesses linger closer to strengths

Plots prevene stories

 Questions blaze the trail of answers

Signs portend warnings

Effeuiller la marguerite

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

This is great work. I love the raw energy.

[Sami Khalil]

Javajavaya! Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this awesome review. Looking forward to you posting.

[duff]

This made me grin. Its clever and raw. Rough and throwing daggers. There are too many lines to say what is my favorite. I really like it Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do Duff! Thank you so much dear poet and friend for this wonderful review and sharing. Always an honor. You are honored

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami... We are the Spirit that guides our World as the Signs in the Sky predict. On the silent Battlefield... we loose some and honor their Quest. We are determined to Save our World with renewed Courage...
knowing that there is so much Sacred to be Saved. softly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us

[Arundass TP]

Enjoyed reading each lines. Good work 👍.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly for the visit and sharing.

[andrew mitchell]

This reminds me of the song Signs signs……do that don’t do that!… we do need signs for guidance hence we always look for signs 👀

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! So true and well articulated. I can't agree more. We do need them or we get lost or take wrong turns. You might end up in Tenbukto. Thank you kindly sir

[Miss Sharon]

Nicely written! Love it. ~Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

Million thank yous Miss Sharon for your gracious visit. Good to see you again.

[Ken Simm.]

This is a travelling poem. Through complex thoughts as well as landscapes, troubles and imaginations and I salute you for it.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do sir! I thank you immensely and salute you honorably for this wonderful review. Always a pleasure to see you.

[Lydia Shutter]

He loves me, he loves me not......such a sweet game young girls play with daisies. It's been years since I saw the French name for the game. Yes, the entire world is a case of "if...then...." we are filled with opposites and contradictions in this world. You have written about them eloquently! Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! I love it. You have summed it up marvelously; wise and succinct. Thank you kindly dear poet and friend for all.

[redzone]

the answer always lies in the number of petals the flower used has... perhaps the real question to ask is what comes first the calm or the storm??? or said another way - there is always a lead-up to the change... in every change, it is the internal which determines the potential outcome... she can only love you if you are lovable... and Sami, being a master poet, how can she not!! loved reading your poem Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! I love your take and summation on this poem. Very wise and true. I'm humbled by your encouragement and thankful as always for your visits.
Keep the warrior spirit alive sir

[Pete]

cleverly told. sometimes it seems as though the only thing we can depend on is change. we'd probably be better off bringing her flowers rather than plucking petals and playing games for revelation ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe! You are an astute man. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much Pete Thoreou for this amazing review.