Low Hanging Fruit

Low Hanging Fruit

A Poem by Sami Khalil

Low Hanging Fruit      by Sami Khalil

Thoughts on failure and success in relationships.




There is deafness in the air that lingers

Calling out things left between us unsaid

Paying no mind to me, pointing fingers

Had I gone to great lengths, failing instead.

 

Failure needs neither speech nor ears to hear

Only dreamscape statues to behold thus

What a stranger who bounces back from fear

Whistle and walk like a hero, nonplus.

 

Hold your breath through the canvas of the night

Confident the briny tears shall avail

I ponder words that bind some beings tight

Leaving indentations of sketchy trail.

 

There is no pleasure in low hanging fruit

Fondly praised are the wins in earned pursuit.

© 2024 Sami Khalil


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That closing couplet….. profound!
So much truth in this poem. I think we have all plucked that low hanging fruit at least once. It sure doesn’t taste very sweet.
“A modern sonnet” is a perfect description! The truths of a modern relationship portrayed so well in sonnet form.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Howdy do! I love your take on this poem. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences .. read more
The water does not struggle against the stone but flows around it until the stone has its edges rounded. It fills any space it enters. It seeps where it may not flow. It tumbles in wild, white abandon, over mountains and precipice, rushing to the sea. It is said that Newton learned about gravity from an apple tree. Do we wait or do we climb? Either is better I would venture than becoming bitter like Aesop's fox over the grapes beyond his grasp. Great form, good read. I enjoyed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! Your review is a poem in itself. Wonderfully said! I love it.
Thank you kindly for shar.. read more
I thoroughly agree with Farjauna's review og this wonderful, widom packed sonnet poem, yep, ' There is no pleasure in taking the path of least resistance, and true praise is reserved for those who pursue their goals with dedication and effort. ' the poet nailed the essence with sagely interpretation, and I too hold equal appraisal and appreciation of the words penned here... Kudos poet Sami! 🏆

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! So appreciative dear poet and friend for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us. Glad yo.. read more
The closing couplet is a thought-provoking reflection on the value of hard-earned achievements versus easy wins. There is no pleasure in taking the path of least resistance, and true praise is reserved for those who pursue their goals with dedication and effort.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farjana Chaity

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

:::::))))))))))))
Tom

1 Year Ago

Excellent summation Farjana 👌
Sami,

I truly enjoyed this piece of most excellent Poetry set to pen of page ... In my life, I have found that the most precious things to be held in heart and hand are those things that you were forced to strive for, to reach for, to sacrifice for as treasures of which you shall never let go ...

Marve

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. You have summed it up marvelously. Thank yo.. read more
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

1 Year Ago

Sammi,
Sad to say, it took many years, and finally the loss of my wife of 43 years to teach s.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Sorry for your loss. Your efforts now are worthy and much needed in this crazy world; anything will .. read more
A profound outpouring of your genuine perspectives on relationships. The fruits of success have to be earned. One hanging low is easy to pick, hence unearned. One that hangs high would require much more effort to pick, to be reached out to and expressed true desire for, hence has to be earned. Intriguing and impressive metaphor indeed in my opinion.
Kudos, cheers.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy woooo! I love your take on this write; profound and true. We all do cherish, appreciate and v.. read more
Powerful way of writing. Nice one

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly sir for sharing your thoughts with us. Honor to see you.
Nothing worth having is easily gained. Unfortunately, we live in a time where people want things without putting forth much effort. In so far as a relationship goes, "low hanging fruit" is not going to cut it. It takes effort.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy woooo! So true and well said. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with .. read more
Riveting stuff Sami, you got these down pact so well written. Just all great lines to read. Well done you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy woooo!
An honor coming from you . Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and exper.. read more
andrew mitchell

5 Months Ago

Funny how complex relationships or just connecting can be so hard in the scope of duration while bi.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

So true and well said
Thank you Emperor of Australia.
Not just a modern sonnet, it too could stand the test of time, I loved reading it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! Thank you so much poet for your time and visit. Glad to see you.

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Added on August 9, 2023
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Tuscaloosa, AL



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