Strawberry Dawn

Strawberry Dawn               by Sami Khalil

It was the morning of momentous waves

Frenzied thoughts gathered in the scented hours

From a radiant sky to vigilant graves

I swung on drowsy swings and high towers.

 

Same old familiar ‘hikers’ trekked the slopes

Denying the escapes of varied joys

Seas roaring and mountains tumbling of hopes

Chasing golden sunbeams and roving ploys.

 

I labored in my garden for lone blooms

Migrating away from guilty parties

Speaking essential peace, sans of more dooms

Benign humdrums, touching hearts at ease.

 

It was the morning of strawberry dawn

Eager love seemed a resplendent icon.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

This, to me moves in all directions at once but still keeps its control. By that I mean there are lots of things and beautiful lines that mean a lot here in this complex but lovely write.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do my good friend. I'm so glad you can relate and can find some gold nuggets. My mind wanders sometimes. Million thank yous.

[Ken Simm.]

You are welcome Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

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[FGFRANKLIN]

This was beautiful to read aloud. And I love the accompanying painting. "Strawberry dawn" is a catchy phrase. Well done on the form in this as well. It's very peaceful feeling and a nice comforting poem to read.

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! Thank you generously Franklin for this wonderful review and visit. You are appreciated.

[duff]

The title is great. Senses are tickled.
"Seas roaring and mountains tumbling of hopes"
That's a sweet line. Great job.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much for the good visit and sharing. All rich blessings.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

"It was the morning of strawberry dawn
Eager love seemed a resplendent icon." I so enjoy your poetry and creative style. It is a wonder to read. And sonnets are not easy to create, let alone have a coherent message. Yours are dreams that come to life in the readers mind. Painting visuals like a painter's before his canvas. Your love for the art form is stitched in each line my friend. You are a talent, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

An honor and a gift from this wonderful poet. Same here about you. I think we share many things. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences.
Keep the blessings coming and alive.

[Sami Khalil]

"Seas roaring and mountains tumbling of hopes

Chasing golden sunbeams and roving ploys."
SK