Strawberry Dawn

Strawberry Dawn

A Poem by Sami Khalil

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Strawberry Dawn               by Sami Khalil




It was the morning of momentous waves

Frenzied thoughts gathered in the scented hours

From a radiant sky to vigilant graves

I swung on drowsy swings and high towers.

 

Same old familiar ‘hikers’ trekked the slopes

Denying the escapes of varied joys

Seas roaring and mountains tumbling of hopes

Chasing golden sunbeams and roving ploys.

 

I labored in my garden for lone blooms

Migrating away from guilty parties

Speaking essential peace, sans of more dooms

Benign humdrums, touching hearts at ease.

 

It was the morning of strawberry dawn

Eager love seemed a resplendent icon.

© 2024 Sami Khalil


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Your imagery is now on par with Monet. Great writing Sami.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

OMG! An honor indeed. I love his works. You are so kind sir. Thank you kindly for all.
Great write! I see in my perspective of what is strawberry,
the war, the fight, and the embodiment of the dead in the strawberry field.
I love the painting that goes with it. Art is magnificent.
The beauty of the world enhancement: Art.
----1809 Black Plague December

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! So true and well said. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences with us. See.. read more
1809 Black Plague December

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome, Dear,
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

:::::)))))))))))))
Really good work Sami and great to see some neo-Sonnets on the Cafe. Excellent.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy! So good to see you. We do need them. Variety is good. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoug.. read more
dear Sami… Seas roaring and mountains tumbling hopes… chasing golden sunbeams and roving ploys.., (every line has touched my Soul. A Sonnet of Strawberry 🍓 Sighs. softly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! Glad it touched your being. Thank you kindly Patricia for sharing your thoughts on this. Add so.. read more
Beautiful dance of words Sami. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

OMG
Thank you kindly Coyote for the good visit and sharing. You are honored.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Sami.
dearest Sami… we are looking forward to fresh Ripe Strawberries in early June… in Virginia USA .. the Hills will be alive with blossoms in the Sun… when Streams of water flow below. ❤️ lovely poetry. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

I'm sure it will be sweet and tasty. The hills and hollers are alive with spring and romance. Add a .. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Awwww dear Sami… you are Magical….
Pleasant Dreams of Strawberry fields. gently, Pat
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

::::::::)))))))))))))))
now here is where i can use my "sigh". i'll take a dawn such as this any day of the week. a regular grocery staple for me. used to pick them too. thanks for the sweet trip back as i wipe the jam from my big mouth. keep spreadin' it sami ... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hehehe! Good to know.
You keep buttering her up and she will be spoiled.
Pete

1 Year Ago

with a name like smuckers, "it has to be good".
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

I do like.......................
Love the imaginary open to so many directions of this complex and truly wonderful write dear Sami.
Colorful and beautiful painting 🎨
Just splendid 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Howdy do! Thank you so much Silmara for your wonderful review and kind words. Pleased you like it.
Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

You are certainly welcome dear 😊
Much to consider in this wonderful sonnet Sami. I was touched by the imagery and references to the natural environment. Strawberry delicious. I saw a a pink sunrise. Love is in the air.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! I agree wholeheartedly. Nothing like it. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experi.. read more
Your meter really excels here, but then - has on many past occasions too, Sami! Just re.read yourr sonnet .it is so visual and whilst compact, your intentions are clear and beautiful Wonderful colours, wonderful mood. Such a 'tasty avatar too! As always, thank you for sharing, Sami.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

OMG! Thank you so much. Gracie millee ...
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Si figuri, signor!
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

:::::::)))))))))))))

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Added on April 30, 2023
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Tuscaloosa, AL



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