Fools rush in

Fools rush in

A Poem by Sami Khalil

Fools rush in                    by Sami Khalil




Faintly, I hear the measured breath of love

Looking through a one-sided mirror’s view

Ears open up to hear prattling thereof

For some lovers take on more they can chew.

 

Percipience clears up recondite things

-The quietude calls of the spurious-

Yet is better to have euphoric strings

Then not love any, drifting down curious.

 

All dormant things hold promises of doubt

While ones lost quell long-winded subterfuges

For rose-colored lenses, longings do sprout

At the tail-end, miscues teach best uses.

 

Step back, let past thoughts find due purposes

Outliving jousting shows and circuses.  

 

© 2024 Sami Khalil


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Tremendous sonnet, and powerful work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

Gracie millee my good ol friend for this powerful review.
Sometimes we all get caught up in the rush. I think we have all been fools once and from that comes experience. It’s never the fairytale! lol! Great words used Sami. Shakespeare would have liked this one.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. All you say is true and right on. Million th.. read more
nice one. you've used some great words - as well the subject matter mandates. ah, the intricacies of love. it is not an emotion of reason let alone patience. it follows where the heart leads without planning or preparation. a heartbeat can be long or short, pitter-patter, pitter-patter, plunk ... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Javajavaya! I love it. You are so astute. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences.. read more
Fools rush in ….
where angels fear to tread.

Wasn’t that the title of a song or a movie some time back in the past Sami?

On the matter of love there has been much jousting and circuses over the centuries. Nothing new there.

Then there’s that other old saying “all’s fair in love and war”.

Dear Sami, you are a master of sonnet’s and this one has carried me to many places and many scenarios. Beautifully penned.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy woooo. I think it was sang by Elvis. Not sure about a movie. You are so kind. I truly admire .. read more
Out living joust and circuses. I love that. To answer the question I know I do but I could not put it words as well as this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Howdy do wonderful poet and artist. Maybe you can write a poem on that subject, so we can all read. .. read more
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Pax
For some lovers take on more they can chew

Love those lines, a golden wisdom, we need to be reminded. I wonder why kings and rich people has/have too many wives and mistresses? Is a person heart measure how much he earns? Is love that complicated or too fluid that we can love 2 or more person at a time? Well we don't know anymore, I guess...

Step back, let past thoughts find due purposes

Everything has its reason, why it is as it was. So we live to learn as they say...
As always you dive deep, bro..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wowzy woooo! You are wise beyond your years brother Pax. I always look forward for your visit and sh.. read more
Writing sonnets has definitely become your forte, Sami. And I even learned a few new words! I'm a happy camper today! Thank you for the smile you always leave me with!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

All free and on the house. Enjoy the camping and the scenery. Thank you kindly for sharing your thou.. read more
dear Sami... to have a romantic Heart... throbbing over Oceans
reminds me of Jonathan Livingston Seagull ... a great Philosopher
who seemed to view the World above the turmoil and feel the
depths of emotion where Dolphins play and splash and even laugh...
Your poetry is always like dancing on a Beach ... waiting for that special
moment when Love becomes tangible.... softly, Pat


Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

I love it! You said much in few. You say things so elegantly. Thank you kindly for sharing your thou.. read more

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Added on April 24, 2023
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Sami Khalil

Tuscaloosa, AL



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