I'm All

We are only human...

I’m All                                by Sami Khalil

I’m passages, conduits, vessels-

perambulating through,

coursing within,

sailing across waves,

chasing out captured moments;

whatever propels me

through life-that exists,

in every way, shape or form.

On a landscape of hatless thoughts,

there I’m… on the path of ten thousand things,

seen and unseen,

poking through fires,

wiping off sweats,

canoeing attidunal sentiences,

suspending floating judgements.

I’m only human, head to toe,

through and out, over and in,

upon the domain-

of beaten paths, crumpled papers, blinking horizons

in tip-toe visions. I’m all!

Reviews

[Ioana Mihai]

Beautiful perfect mess… not alone, not the only one, there’s still about the same. Lovely poem, painting, could see within and behind every word, a network of infinite beauty, perfect human mess, creating a wonderful universe on its own

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy! So true and well observed. Thank you so much Miss Mihai for this awesome review. All appreciated.

[Ioana Mihai]

Welcome, my pleasure to appreciate your amazing writing :)

[Sami Khalil]

Gracie Mille............

[duff]

"chasing out captured moments;
"poking through fires"
Those are killer lines. The whole thing makes me smile. Great writing.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy there Duffy! Thank you so much for this mesmerizing review and kind sharing. You are appreciated.

[Robert Haigh]

An interesting write. I guess we can all be "all" if we put our mind to it, and truly believe. A good, positive message!

[Sami Khalil]

WOWZY! SO TRUE AND WELL ARTICULATED. Thank you so much Robert for this amazing review and wisdom.

[JE Falcon]

An interesting choice of words, powerfully written and composed with a "Got-Cha" sort of ending. --- I liked it, lots!

[Sami Khalil]

Whoeeeee! I'm blown away. An honor coming from you. Thank you so much JE Falcon for all. See you soon.

[Silmara McGarry]

Such superbly well composed poem, with excellent choice of words and actually very powerful read that I very much enjoy it!!!

Big well done from me!!!
I hope all is great with you dear Sami :-))

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! I'm blown away by your review. I'm extremely happy that you liked it and enjoyed the read. So glad to see you back. Thank you for sharing and visiting. See you soon.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are most welcome dear :-) Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

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[keith]

this is an interesting movement of reality
the continued forward path of each line with a designed plot of the previous line and the one unread is a parade of visual stimulation
i am a detail nerd and appreciate words serving purpose in continued motion
so very well composed

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love your take on this poem and your thoughts of honesty. You are sharp indeed. Thank you so much dear poet and friend. See you soon.

[keith]

i may have fallen of the turnip truck but it weren't last night! HA!

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. You are humorous. I like Turnip greens, Spinach and Collard Greens...

[keith]

collard king i am... veggie or meaty ... it's all good
i am known as MATERMAN locally ... my healthy organic garden is MATERNATION!

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy.................

[Lisasview]

Our life journeys are all so different and vast and, yet the same..
I loved the line "Hatless thoughts"
This was truly thought provoking.. Our thoughts can be boundless with no limits..
I wrote a poem called Thoughts when I was much younger, that explores this very THOUGHT..ha ha..
Your poem was inspiring to say the least and I truly enjoyed ever word!!
Your friend, Lisa in Spain

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy Lisa from beautiful Spain! I hope you are enjoying your stay and doing what you love to do the most: Art and poetry...I love your take on this poem. So true and well said. Thank you so much for all. On my way to visit.

[Lisasview]

Fantastic... and welcome on this beautiful day of Easter!!

[Lisasview]

P.S. I love the art work you chose!!

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................

[Chris Shaw]

Your choice of vocabulary here is super Sami. I felt fast movement here of a journey through life and what a journey that can be. I'm only human you say, and that covers a multitude of emotions. I like where you took me as I wandered through your lines. Have a lovely day Sami.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy! What a journey indeed as you know and say dear poet and friend. It is unique to each one of us. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and visit. See you in a jiffy.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Chris.

[zainul]

Wonderful thought provoking piece on the journey of life.You presented precious insights with your powerful words.I congratulate you for the great work.

[Sami Khalil]

Hi sir Zainul. I hope all is well with you. Long time , no see. Thank you so much for the precious gift of your visit and you.

[Einstein Noodle]

the Buddhist teachings of god/man ... Jesus Christ the One true God/Man ... (by Faith sir) ;) i love the interweaving of all things .. permeating .. our minds are so capable .. we can probe with imagination .. with education .. with wisdom .. and i am so thankful for you .. who pens it ..through crumpled papers, ever elusive "blinking horizons" .. ol' Sol winking in and out so routinely yet each one a spectacle .. i love your poem .. reading so inspired me noodle .. this: " canoeing attidunal sentiences," is such a delight for me! one should not even try to say it any faster than it commands one to ... so glad i stopped by this morning sir! be well, happy and safe my friend!
E.
ps. the pic pierces me with it's gaze .. is it yours??

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy! Your faith and kindness shine through sir Einstein with generous takes and gifts on this write. Although we come from different faiths and backgrounds, but we share some universal messages. Painting is not mine but I like the powerful gaze as you marvelously said.
May God bless you as always and thank you for all. See you in a jiffy sir to enjoy your garden of delights.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! i rejoice in or differences and great similarities in Faith .. after all ... when we really seek the Truth .. we will absolutely find it ..luv on ya brother ...

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr. All the love and blessings may come yourway. You are welcome sir Einstein.