Dark Veil

Dark Veil                           by Sami Khalil

 

Your dark veil shimmered

at the sun’s setting.

Many fiery words mirrored

the bluntness of amber stars.

Walking along your thoughts

I stumbled and fell

Onto the palm of darkness…

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really like this, Sami, but absolutely love the last three lines...what an image...and metaphor of walking along thoughts.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Jacob for sharing your thoughts and your much appreciated visit. You are honored by all.