Well, this takes me back to Briggs street in Lockport...
now a main highway, back then a gravel, dead end road.
cars lined up...everyone necking in the back seat...or the really daring, in the front seat.
radio blasting those tunes from the sixties to feel young love by.
thanks for the road trip back, Sami....I wish they never would have paved that street.
j.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Whoaaa! What a lovely thing you share with us great poet. That is so fitting for this poem and Valen.. read moreWhoaaa! What a lovely thing you share with us great poet. That is so fitting for this poem and Valentine's. I hate that they paved that memorable road.
At least you still have an enchanting memory. Thank you so much sir Jacob for all. See you at your page.
2 Years Ago
Our "place" was called the 'Square Pond.' Filled on Winter's days with skaters, and nights surroun.. read moreOur "place" was called the 'Square Pond.' Filled on Winter's days with skaters, and nights surrounded by cars with steamed up windows...
There are so many lovely images here. I especially like the last stanza. It is clear you appreciate the many facets of love.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Javajavaya! Thank you so much Zoe for this wonderful review and kind visit. Glad you enjoyed it. See.. read moreJavajavaya! Thank you so much Zoe for this wonderful review and kind visit. Glad you enjoyed it. See you soon.
(Your sight is being stored away in keepsakes of fairy tales, the tidal waves of captive hearts, the lambent light betrothed to star-kissed skies,) Now THIS is what real poetry looks like! Just beautiful writing. ~Sharon
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Wow! Thank you so much Miss Sharon for this wonderful review. You are appreciated. See you around.
Visions of submarine races.....a light airy romantic write filled with puppy love. Ah, memories. I loved this, Sami. Lydi**
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Whoeeee! Thank you so much Lydia Shutter for this lovely review and timely visit. Glad you like it. .. read moreWhoeeee! Thank you so much Lydia Shutter for this lovely review and timely visit. Glad you like it. See you around...
King Sami we never forget those lovers lane places, they become ingrained and looking back seems not that long ago especially if we didn't know the time plus the gap between young and being older is not as long as we think. Descriptive fine writing as per your norm.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Wow! So true and well said Emperor Andrew. So glad to see you visit and share your thoughts.
.. read moreWow! So true and well said Emperor Andrew. So glad to see you visit and share your thoughts.
I hope you are invited to the queen's jubilee.
We have a Lover's Lane of sorts here called "Lookout Hill". I've often wondered if the name referred to all the parking couples who come to watch the city lights and stay to steam up the windows but have to be on the "lookout" for parents and cops. (smile) Your descriptions here are great. I particularly enjoyed, " the tidal waves of captive hearts". Great line! I enjoyed reading. F.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Wowzy! You are on the right track Fabian and the right lane. Hehehe...
I meant this poem to b.. read moreWowzy! You are on the right track Fabian and the right lane. Hehehe...
I meant this poem to be light and soft regarding Valentines. I hope you enjoy yours with your beloved. Jewelry, flowers and chocolate...
Wow! So glad to see you visit my page. I missed you dearly. Thank you so much for all. Glad you like.. read moreWow! So glad to see you visit my page. I missed you dearly. Thank you so much for all. Glad you like it.
2 Years Ago
you’re so very welcomed, v. much deserved, dear poet and i’ve missed you as well and reading you.. read moreyou’re so very welcomed, v. much deserved, dear poet and i’ve missed you as well and reading your artistry. i had to heed reality’s call.
i’m just enjoying silently reading for now and i came across your latest piece. very hard time with this site and my pc, constantly freezes...so it gets frustrating
lol
i hope you’ve been well, and you’re keeping safe.
namaste:)
2 Years Ago
All wonderful and understandable. Namaste back to you. Be blessed.