Distant

I truly feel that...

Distant                by Sami Khalil

Sometimes, I feel distant

From myself; outside of myself,

Even in the broad daylight,

Even from family and friends,

Encapsulated by nostalgia

Feelings stored in pretentious silence.

I missed many sights

In my oblivion.

It was all blurry, straining vision;

Emotions like ground up sediments.

I tell myself: There is no sightseeing without believing;

Life seems a fashionable show,

For the famed, for the popular,

For the mannequins arranged in frozen frames-

Wavering in the distance; the order and nuances of impressions,

Front mirrors, side mirrors telling us:

Things are not close as they may seem.

Some rotating like vinyl records, with relative ease.

Oh! How weighty is love,

Hollow the drainage holes.               

Reviews

[Ada]

I think most of us need a fantasy to retreat to in the thick of it, since life seems to be more tailored to the wealthy...well stated.

[Sami Khalil]

Javajavinga! I totally agree. Thank you so much Ada. Pleased you shared.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Sami, a belated happy new year to you dear poet. Your posted image is totally mesmerising. You know you write beautiful poetry and your lines had me thinking here. There are times I do believe in our lives when we all feel as though we are on the outside. I have been in rooms full of people I know, yet feel distant. Some people appear to exude confidence, but we don't actually know how they are feeling. My bet is that they aren't always feeling as great on the inside as they look to others. Such a pleasure to read and visit you.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love and accept every word you said. How so true and how marvelous you point out the truth. Happy Belated New Year. May it be a fruitful and blessed one for you and family.
Thank you so much. See you soon.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

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[Writergurl]

I always feel distant and like an outcast, I really enjoyed this piece. I like your picture.
awesome write....

[Sami Khalil]

Javajavaya! I do too in many ways. Life can be strange. Thank you so much.

[Lydia Shutter]

Life seems to be a cakewalk for the celebrities, but I wonder how their lives truly are out of the spotlight. Feeling outside of yourself....there is a concept that is interesting. Watching oneself from a distance and seeing one's own life like a movie. Sami, your poetry is always wonderful and multi-layered. The artwork is super here. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Javajavaya! So glad you enjoyed this humble write and so glad you think so. I feel same about your creations. An interesting concept indeed that you mentioned. Kind of detachment and watching a movie. Thank you kindly. Have a wonderful New Year.

[lightsong]

My dear Sami,

a true believer, a true seer, will find it very hard at times to live in a world filled with shallow people and shallow society, even close ones can weigh on us, it's ok and healthy to distance your self in your isolation, to protect your self, your energy, rebuild your strength and power. and yes my dear Faith is the key.

please stay safe, stay at peace, stay faithful, Bless You with so much divine power❤️

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said. Much love, joy and laughter may come your way. May The Lord bless you and keep you in His care. Thank you so much.

[lightsong]

The very same to You and more dear Sami✨

[Sami Khalil]

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[Re-Pete]

the pic is mesmerizing. this is so surreal but relatable. i sometimes feel as though i am a bystander watching myself and my world from both a distance and close up. such a powerful ending - hits squarely between the eyes. this has to be a favorite i have read of yours. captures the feelings and emotions so well - perhaps too well. outstanding ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy! I love how you summed it up with the word bystander. You are so wise from what I have seen and read from you. You got it and you got what it takes. This came spontaneous and from a deep well. Thank you so much dear poet and friend. May you have blessed holidays.

[emmajoy]

( The picture is incredible.. such a find for your words.)

This really is a very special poem, Sami.. tis a true glimpse into a mind normally instilled with both instinct and life- accumulated wisdom. Seems your view on the Present is presently viewed maybe realised, by how you view the brief or snatched glimpses of the all around. Life has altered and not by choice. emotions are juggled, perhaps - diluted?

' I missed many sights - In my oblivion. - It was all blurry, straining vision; - Emotions like ground up sediments.'

[Sami Khalil]

Woozy! So true and well said dear poet and friend. We do miss many things and opportunities in life as you know. We need clearer courses of action, better visions. Sometimes regret sets in, sometimes we spring to action. Seeing the signs on the roads can be so helpful and reading some good maps. Thank you kindly for all.
Wishing you and family a Merry Christmas and happy upcoming New year's.

[emmajoy]

I completely agree about the signs and maps, Sami. Plus, let them be wrapped by both Thought and Love because - they matter. Best wishes always, sir

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you again for your generous spirit. All best wishes as well.

[Karmee]

Front mirrors, side mirrors telling us:
Things are not close as they may seem.
Some rotating like vinyl records, with relative ease.
Oh! How weighty is love,
Hollow the drainage holes.

PERFECT words here, this is a wonderful write,
emotions filled. nicely expressed

[Sami Khalil]

Hello dear fellow poet. So glad you felt what I felt or feel. Thank you for the lovely visit and affirmation.

[Karmee]

not a problem : )

[Sami Khalil]

Gracie Millee..........

[Karmee]

what??.........

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you in Italian.

[Karmee]

oh you! LOL : ) You are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

and for those of us not so popular...just another day watching the "fashionable show" from
the audience....
and I keep playing that record over and over again....
the feeling just won't drain....the clog is painful.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said sir Jacob. Glad you shared yourself. Thank you so much. See you soon.