White Flowers

In honor of...Happened long time ago...

White Flowers                     by Sami Khalil

It was high noon. A tepid wind blew across the purple Wisteria bending in summer fields. There was a sense of peace as I placed flowers on my mother’s grave. My dad had just passed before two years to date. My knees were quite weakened as my thoughts deepened in reflections and prayer.

I needed some closure and strength, so I felt like tuning my inner guitar to play with its broken strings this binding love for her.

This was an open altar; a place to honor the departed who lost no invitation to be inducted. I proceeded to place my tall white roses upon the grave; the ones I arranged with my creative flare. Angels floated by, mixing with some cirrus clouds over and above.

And so here, separated yet all together, head on her sweet breast, I uttered:

“Mom! There were those endearing moments we shared

There were those hands that selflessly cared

There was your spark of light, brought forth

Always, new beginnings of life with hope paired

There was you! Multitude of thoughts…

The Cherry blossoms of spring

Faces finding smiles midst the war

Looking to escape death and mayhem

There were the foghorns you generously shared

To be safe when I left home at age twenty-one

The dead silence that followed the heartbreaks

The colourful butterflies alight on sunset shadows

There was your wonder, your passions, your ecstasy never surrendered

There was your love in perfect harmony midst my agony.  

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pax]

For me it's been years as well, every time I visit my parents grave, I always bought two candles with two set of flowers for each one. It's lonesome without them now, but I rather let them go than suffer more of the sickness that struck them. My memories fade but the love and care they given us remains forever in our heart.. Brother it's been long... And this piece brings memories of my loved once.. I hope ur doing much better, take care and I'll always remember a brother here in wc...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thrilled by your visit brother Pax and saddened by your parents departure. Stay positive, safe and creative my friend. You are one of the originals. Peace, love and harmony.

[Pax]

Always here to keep in touch..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! That is wonderful.

[Coyote Poetry]

So wonderful and beautiful Sami. I loved the complete poem.
"There was your wonder, your passions, your ecstasy never surrendered
There was your love in perfect harmony midst my agony."
The above lines stayed with me. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kuandio]

Lovely and heartfelt poem. I like the almost casual way it starts, and then the imagery starts to enter in and those difficult to describe emotions of loss are enhanced in power. Nice to see u posting on the site often. It's been quite a few years since I joined, and I've been gone at long stretches, but I recall u were one of the first friends on here. It is great that you continue to write.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! It is indeed been a while since last I saw you. Welcome back and many thank yous for all. Hope all is well.

[Patricia Wedel]

The Prophet by Kahlil Gibran reminds me so much of your writings...
our children are like Arrows sent out into the world... tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and gentle soul Pat. You are cherished.

[lightsong]

sometimes better to say nothing, express nothing... when words are as genuine, as heavenly, as real and true as yours here dearest Sami, your words are beyond words, your written song is beyond something for our ears to hear, but it's heard by hearts. gorgeous, your mom is blessed and proud watching her son from above being this loving and fine human being. Bless You my gentle wonderful friend~

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Awww this is one of the best elegies i have read, so creatively imaginatively touching and super eloquent! I was admiring the cirrus, broken strings and flowers lines so much. Condolences poet!! Kudos!!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too , right on top of my page

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa! Thank you so much Zaynab for this lovely and heartfelt response to my poem. You are appreciated. Be blessed.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... you are always an Orphan when your
Mother passes... May your memories bring Comfort.
tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

It is so true as you say dear poet Patricia. It is so good to see you. I was wondering if you are doing well. Maybe busy with life's ups and downs. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

[Patricia Wedel]

Even though we have a Pandemic... we still must mingle in the World... and handle responsibilities.
Poetry gives us a chance to share and pray for each other. We have had our vaccines; and others choose not to do so. We worry about others. Glad to know you are still penning your creations of story poems.
Be Brave and Safe. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Incredibly poignant and beautiful, your moments with your mother, in spirit. I was touched by your great love for her. It runs deep and I felt it so. What a wonderful inspiration she was to you. I love this poem so much. It speaks to me about everlasting love and the strength and bonds of motherhood. Wonderful write Sami. So very well penned.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

She was indeed dear Chris. Loss and hurt is still felt. I hope yours are still alive and well. May you be blessed as always. Thank you kindly.

[Chris Shaw]

My Ma is half here and half with the angels. I am more than thankful for the little of her still with us. She has been a wondrous blessing to five of us, although one sibling is ready to receive her.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Best wishes.

[Chris Shaw]

And to you too Sami:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, Sami, this is so beautiful...so emotional. I bring flowers to my parents' grave frequently. I "talk" to them and tell hem what is going on in my life. Yes, there are tears too, but the memories are sweet because I was so lucky to have the parents I did. This poem is so touching. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! So true and well said. You are doing the right thing. May you find some solace, meaning and strength in their death. Thank you so much for the sharing and visit.

[Seuwandi]

This is a touching and a beautifully written poem. I can imagine the scenery in my head
Keep on writing

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Seuwandi for this wonderful review and kind words. See you soon.