Creepy

Creepy

A Story by Sami Khalil
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The OB writer...

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<a href="https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Henryk_Weyssenhoff_-_Przeczucie_1893.jpg">Henryk Weyssenhoff, "Premonition,"


Creepy                               by Sami S. Khalil





Something is amiss about my guilty pleasures; they could be slightly perverse. We all have our penchant for something; hidden or pronounced. But, to our common defense, many turgid interests are not hallmarking of deadness.


As an OB writer(obituary), I relished subliminally the diseased stories in their flairs of reinvention, the shedding of sharper light at the rosy-hued qualities they possessed, seeing clearly above the distractions, beyond the imperfections. My obituary writings (sometimes in a poetic form) were poised between life and death.


How can we embrace life fully while outfacing death? For we can’t fully control how our lives will be turning out or envisage their death outcome!


In my short scripts of their legacies, I drew upon facts and my emotional reservoir. I much praised the subject and as for the setting, I was peripatetic; a plucky mortal.


As a result, I had two of my dead clients haunt me and my house in bizarre and morbid ways for they thought (even though dead) that my obituaries did not do them justice or were not flowery enough. Matters continued to worsen, hauntingly prescient, most indelibly eccentric.


In the muddle, I could not withhold my suppressed emotions with any enduring popularity. I became snappier at cracking those puzzles. On one occasion, when few days passed, while I was visiting the home of the newly widowed wife of said individual (he committed suicide), the trail to her farmhouse was long, I felt a rampage of some rocks being thrown at me (I remembered he was a Rockhound of sorts). It dawned on me that I was the bullseye to his wrath.


Another time, as I called Alexa in my house, a strange weeping and wailing sound blared. I had no clue to parry or ward off. I thought to blame technologies that can be venial, especially if they were bought at a bargain price but this phenomenon kept intruding, proffering anxiety beyond comparison…Creepy indeed.


I skittered back to writing wedding poetry with healthy doses of crowing!   

 

 

© 2020 Sami Khalil


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I see Sami now. The new Dr Jekyl and Mr Hyde has arrived bringing stories to minds to fill with horror and the macabre while stroking your thoughts that everything will be alright. Impeccable writing King Sami.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Hehehe! Thank you so much Andrew Mitchell for this scary review(Lol) and your precious input. As you.. read more
Do you wanna scare me ? I am scared of dark places .
A good write ..this one .
Hope you are good .tyfs .
Keep safe
Love , Ankita

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Hehehe! I would if I could. Just kidding. You will be ok. Thank you so much. All is fine. Stay safe .. read more
I love how you combine a real-life endeavor (OB writing) with a Halloween helping of imagination. While most of us imagine OB writers as having boring duty, only YOU would imagine this career, were the OB writer to take liberties and tell the death tales as they REALLY went down. And imagining newly-deceased seeking revenge for flimsy OB details (only you would imagine that!) What's missing from this story, perhaps -- a few specific examples of how an OB could write what readers REALLY want to know! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow! I love your take on this story. I like to consider that for another story and I thank you for t.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Can't wait to see where this goes . . .
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

::::::::::))))))))
Oh so dark and scary and ended with humour , quite a topic to pick and then make it sing...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Happy Halloween Moon. I hear the howls of the night. May you be safe and have a fun one. Thank you s.. read more
I knew you would be writing a spooky one for Halloween. You did not disappoint. A haunted house with ghouls and ghosts getting the help of Alexa. What a concept! Loved it. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Whoa! Thank you for visiting Lydia and sharing your thoughts on this write. I hope all is well. Stay.. read more
You did a great job on this one. Love the imagery and the concept of the story. Overall a very impressive piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

:::::::::::))))))))))
Sean M. Addams

4 Years Ago

It's nice coming back and seeing familiar faces
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Nice to see you ....
The paranormal is not a subject that I thoroughly understand.
However, I have had an unusual glimpse' on several occasions.
So I have an "open mind" on the subject. Since March of this year 2020--
I have discovered an organic grocery store where I do most of my shopping.
They have a small "florist" collection in the back of the store... where
you can buy a dozen long-stem Roses for $12.00. They are so much fresher
and beautiful than you get from the Florists. So every few weeks I buy a dozen...
They come in a gold color, a peach color, a creme white, yellow, and shades of red.
I set them by my Kitchen Sink with a large window; I get lost in the ambience of
the romantic overtures. It is my therapy. My husband finds this therapy also.
I may not plan my demise or "farewell" Service; however, I do enjoy my Roses
while I am still very much alive. A few of my poems may be read at my Service...
if I leave a written request. Perhaps I will be a Cardinal (bird) in my next life,
and I will haunt my family and friends.... in a lovely quiet way. tenderly, Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. I love the story you shared with us. Maybe you can turn it into a small journal or an informal .. read more
I agree with Chris...we should write our own obituaries...they never get it write or right...
love the pic...the dogs howling at the specter....

and now you have given me food for thought...why does my Alexa suddenly turn herself on and say something...perhaps she feels a ghost and is trying to speak to it...
Alexa, who died recently? Alexa, are they still here? Alexa, why are those dogs howling?


Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Hehehe. I love your take on this write and I so agree with you. I felt to use modern technology to s.. read more
Ha ha Sami. A good tale well told. Now the solution would be for the dead before they died to write their own obituary. That way they will have no one to blame will they? I guess the dead are more difficult to please :)) Weddings sound a better bet.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

I will. Thank you kindly. Until next time. Adieu
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

You know I called again, because this one gave me such a chuckle. It appealed to my wicked sense of .. read more
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Hahaha. All wonderful. Long live the Chris...

"How can we embrace life fully while outfacing death?"

Posted 4 Years Ago



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