Poignant memories flashed bright in her mind. Her
outward expressions were an intimate display window of things passed. A Jewish
widow, imbued with grace and charm, resilience refreshed the pages of life. She
could not stifle a giggle sometimes without feigning interest in things. In her
mind, nothing can outbid love felt for her late husband who was led to his
death by the Nazis, losing the breadwinner status as a shoemaker of finest
leather.
Nightly, still struggling, she would cry out loud,
her voice carried the distances to his unknown grave. An atheist happened to
pass by her house, meager and bleak by his standards, overheard those loud,
somber notes. Being so poor, she prayed that God will wrap His mercy around
her, to provide her with a basket of bread and butter; a basket of food for she
lost all assistance except what she grows in her yard. No one will give her a
job either for what she represented and her age, too.
The atheist, being cynical of religious people, he
felt richly entertained at their shallowness and lack of savviness. He derived
a plan so that to prove her wrong, compelling her to see there was, is no God.
She needs to live in reality, he thought to himself. He hastily went to the
marketplace, bought a prized basket of variety stuff, like bread, cheeses and
fruit and endeavored to break into her house to place it on the dining table
then waited outside for her return from the fields.
With great exhilaration, her heart brimmed with
gratitude to God for the miracle. As she reveled in joy, she heard a boisterous
knock, shattering her peace to the core. Who could it be?
After opening the door, he appeared to her in a
stern manner but politely savvy saying: “Ma’am, I overheard your prayers and
cries and, being an atheist, I played a trick on you. It was I who purchased
the basket, not God! I did place it on your table while you worked in the
field. I had hoped faith will not make a yoke of ignorance upon you and others
with deep attachments.” She smiled at him, saying profoundly: “Sir, God keeps
careful eyes on His servants even widows. Certainly, He is loving and
compassionate. As you deny Him or downplay His attributes, he had used you to
answer my prayers. Do not thumb your nose at Him lest be mired with the Devil’s
snares. God bless you though for your good deed.”
For those who believe, this beautiful and fair story shows example that's easily understood. To those who are still looking for something other than hope, this story turns over yet another page on an ongoing saga. For and to those who believe their own strength is enough to support them through a lifetime.. one can but pray they safely walk the shallows and touch the moon.
You write with such elegance and calm, Sami.
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Whoa! So true and well articulated. This testifies to the power of human survival vs the injustice b.. read moreWhoa! So true and well articulated. This testifies to the power of human survival vs the injustice bestowed upon individuals or groups. A help from up above is an ingredient to preserve the human condition. Some faiths give us common sense and clarity on matters of the unseen world, while others blur things. Simple faith is the best, in my opinion, with purity of heart. Submission to the will of God, reliance on His providence but at the same time using our faculties to make it along. God will help those who help themselves as it has been said. Million thank yous and be blessed.
Whoa! You have summed it up marvelously dear poet and friend. I like how you look at things in great.. read moreWhoa! You have summed it up marvelously dear poet and friend. I like how you look at things in great perspective. Be blessed.
Wow! He is gracious and merciful indeed. Thank you for the message and bless you for the visit. See .. read moreWow! He is gracious and merciful indeed. Thank you for the message and bless you for the visit. See you another rime.
Such a good read Sami. You always reel the reader in to your lines and they are never disappointed. For all her suffering, she never lost her faith. No wonder the atheist was astounded. Some people are like that, they need that faith to keep them going. It is similar in some ways to the air we breathe. Without it, we don't survive. Some would say that sort of faith is a blessing, but I am not yet convinced. Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Wow! Thank you so much Vhristine Snne Shaw for this wonderful review and take on this write. You are.. read moreWow! Thank you so much Vhristine Snne Shaw for this wonderful review and take on this write. You are honored...
dear Sami... G-d works in mysterious ways. If our heart is in prayer every day...
we may be amazed at G-d's wondrous works. Do not be disheartened... G-d will show the way.
truly, Pat Your poem has inspired me to have more Faith. Hope and Charity, "but the greatest of these is Love". Amen
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Whoa! So true and well spoken. You have blessed me with your visit. Enjoy all that God has provided... read moreWhoa! So true and well spoken. You have blessed me with your visit. Enjoy all that God has provided.
What a wonderful, moving, picturesque, melancholic, vivid and touching story!
It is full of compassion and wisdom and optimism. The imagery, from beginning, middle and end, is filled with suspense, grabbing the reader's attention.
Yet it portrays the sad reality of human cruelty such as the holocaust.
But all hope is not lost because, thanks God, there are compassionate people like us poets who speak for the voiceless!
Well done!!!
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Wow! I love your words and how you put things in great perspective. I can't agree more with your tru.. read moreWow! I love your words and how you put things in great perspective. I can't agree more with your truth about the human condition and so forth. Thank you so much BlackPrince for taking the time and effort to review. God bless.
This is the poster child for SHOW instead of tell, especially when writing about faith or other inspirational writing, which can sound preachy when it's about how to live. Here, you use a solid example of faith and you told the story clearly, with a little bit of drama, but mostly straightforward storytelling, letting the story tell itself. Before I got to the end, I had the same reaction the heroine in your story had. I admire you for how many details you can pack into a story (even some pertinent history of the characters!) and still have the message be simple & straightforward, not too long, perfect for the short attention spans many online readers may have! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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Whoa! Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this lovely and uplifting review. Your wings of .. read moreWhoa! Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this lovely and uplifting review. Your wings of inspiration lift us up to the challenges of life. Nothing like empowering the human soul to do its brightest good. All rich blessings.
beautifully compelling story, dear poet...inspiring to say the least!
you convey (one) having such strong belief in her faith. despite, the nay sayers and in dealing with despairs/betrayals in life we all unfortunately have no choice to face. how a shattered heart not succumbing towards an easy path of embitterment, shows not only such inner strength but a beautiful soul, splendidly. & is a lesson we all could and should definitely put into practice!
the emotional depth, tangible imagery you paint in your poetic story telling is amazing!
always a treat to immerse myself into your your poetic garden ~ thank you for sharing ☺︎
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Wow! Always a treat when you visit and share your intellect and soul. So glad it touched you as you .. read moreWow! Always a treat when you visit and share your intellect and soul. So glad it touched you as you touch us with your loving kindness. Million blessings.
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you’re welcomed Sami, it’s always such a pleasure to read your art...you never fail to bless us .. read moreyou’re welcomed Sami, it’s always such a pleasure to read your art...you never fail to bless us all with inspiration and your gracious presence on here.
A powerful story, Sami. It is amazing how some people can keep their faith after so much adversity enters their lives. Written with deep emotion and wonderful imagery. I enjoyed it. Lydi**
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Whoa! So true and well summarized. Humans can be amazing. Thank you for sharing and visiting.