Dawn And Sunset

Contemplations...

Dawn and sunset By Sami Khalil

 

And at the hour of manifestation;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunset of lamentation.

And at the hour of realization;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunrise of exultation.     

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I really love your overall message, which I firmly believe in, no matter how yukky life may feel at times. Eventually the darkness ends & the sunrise begins. And you've found an interesting & original way to convey this old axiom. It's fun to watch you experiment outside the dots of your usual writing style. Nicely thought-provoking & impactful! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. I do know you embrace it all with your fighting and generous spirit. Your works desrve all red-carpet treatments.

[Lily Finch]

Wow bravo what a spiritful sunset of lamentation and exultation of sunrise....I so love to see sunset and sunrise and this vivid view is another love of it .. Another beautiful piece ...
Thankyou for sharing !

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I can't thank you enough Lilly Finch for this marvelous review and kind visit. All rich blessings...

[Lily Finch]

No problem , thanks to you too ..and you muchly welcome !

[Sami Khalil]

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[lightsong]

I feel the spirit merging with nature, becoming one entity, that's a secret of being blessed, to be grateful, to let it be... whatever it is, accpet and let it be, then the growth to something greater will be, so the pain and happiness in life, all the opposites in life, You've embraced life itself, how to live gratefully through it, Your words have a powerful effect over us.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Amazing you are. I love every word you say. You are like a surgeon of meaning and healing. Gracie Millee my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"I feel the spirit merging with nature, becoming one entity, that's a secret of being blessed, to be grateful, to let it be... whatever it is, accpet and let it be, then the growth to something greater will be, so the pain and happiness in life, all the opposites in life, You've embraced life itself, how to live gratefully through it"

A beautiful and powerful message and poem my friend...

[lightsong]

You are spoiling me my friend, I also love and cherish everything You say to me, thank You, greatly*

[Sami Khalil]

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[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful words and thoughts shared. You left something for the reader to ponder upon. Thank you Sami for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you too beloved poet and friend for this amazing review and kind words. All appreciated...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

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[moog-drika]

I can sense the metaphor and picture that it tried to depict. A very vivid view with the sunset of lamentation and sunrise of exultation. Felt like it gave a warm red carpet treatment to the journey of the sun. Great work!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Drika for the visit and lovely take on this poem. Be blessed...

[moog-drika]

my pleasure :D

[Sami Khalil]

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[Onlyme]

A top thought-provoking, attention poem that makes you notice all you said. wow..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Dee for this wonderful review and take on this poem. You are appreciated...

[Onlyme]

I don't think you see how talented you are. And you are very welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Feed back inspires us more. Thank you kindly...

[Onlyme]

my pleasure

[Sami Khalil]

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[Sneh]

well penned!! Few words are approaching best. Keep it up 👆
Sneh

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Many and many thank yous to you Sneh and to your visit.

[Sneh]

More than welcome.!☺

[Sami Khalil]

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[Daz]

The great cycle of beginning and ending. Life and death. And then ressurection.
"Greet the sunrise of exultation"
Very well penned

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you Jodash for the time and visit.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... regrets are part of the silver lining as we
near the rainbow of our life... the colors reflecting the
sunshine as well as the purple rain... the spring of pink and blue...
the fall of gold and magenta... a book on a shelf edged in love. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you so much Patricia Wedel for this wonderful review and sharing. Glad you did visit.

[Jon Roggie]

I like it. I wonder in the morning. Take time to think. Then, I get to contemplate in the evening.
The problem is I still wonder while I sleep.

Nice one.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said. Thank you so much Jon for the time and visit. All appreciated.

[Jon Roggie]

My pleasure.

[Sami Khalil]

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