Brave It
A Poem by
Sami Khalil
Romance and courage...
Brave It… Sami
Khalil
I braved wars, rains and high seas
The Western and Eastern fronts
Language barriers
The veils that cloud many moons
The heart quivers,
Awakening at night
The speed of sound,
The light of reason
Questions and exclamation marks
Responses and rejections
The casual, the formal
The radiance of your star
The endless search
Between…
Cradles and graves
I braved
loving you!
© 2017 Sami Khalil
Reviews
Fearing no man and being brave is life. Thanks for sharing this wonderful talent.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear poet for your visit and great feedback. All appreciated.
7 Years Ago
LOVE THE DRESS, GIRRRRRL!
7 Years Ago
:::::))))))).......
All's fair in love and war and to succeed in love, one must brave it all. What a strong write this is, Sami...one of my favorites from you. Lydi**
Posted 7 Years Ago
All's fair in love and war and to succeed in love, one must brave it all. What a strong write this is, Sami...one of my favorites from you. Lydi**
7 Years Ago
Amazing you are as your lovely review. I thank you tremendously.
In a way, this reflects the sighs of every poet.
"the veils that cloud many moons"
I found the structure and style a bit contrasting to your ideal style.
Courage is what makes one brave.
Excellent!!
Posted 7 Years Ago
In a way, this reflects the sighs of every poet.
"the veils that cloud many moons"
I found the structure and style a bit contrasting to your ideal style.
Courage is what makes one brave.
Excellent!!
7 Years Ago
All true. Thank you so much Tazeen for this marvelous review and kind visit. Good to see you.
beautiful creation...
keep writing..
Posted 7 Years Ago
beautiful creation...
keep writing..
7 Years Ago
Thank you dear poet for this lovely review. So glad you like it.
Sam, your words rush into the storm of love. A knight of romance!
Regards,
Al
Posted 7 Years Ago
Sam, your words rush into the storm of love. A knight of romance!
Regards,
Al
7 Years Ago
My goodness. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. Always gratefu.. read more My goodness. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. Always grateful.
Great! Very well written.
Love requires bravery, it can't be for a coward. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Great! Very well written.
Love requires bravery, it can't be for a coward. :)
7 Years Ago
So true and well articulated. Thank you so much for all your feedback. Take care.
7 Years Ago
You're Welcome.
Lovely poem. Romance still exists, but romance with courage now extinct. A fabulous poem Sami.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Lovely poem. Romance still exists, but romance with courage now extinct. A fabulous poem Sami.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear poet for your visit and grateful feedback. You are appreciated.
Nicely penned Sami. Only with the bravest heart can we love another unconditionally. It takes great courage to do so.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nicely penned Sami. Only with the bravest heart can we love another unconditionally. It takes great courage to do so.
7 Years Ago
You are amazing and it is so true how you sum it all up. Thank you so much.
Like a champion knight on charging, white steed, neither friend, foe nor enraged dragon could prevent this gallant gentleman from reaching his heart's desire, his lady fair awaits his imminent arrival, resplendent in royal red!
An absolutely enchanting, chivalrously penned romance poem, true love doth conquer all!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Like a champion knight on charging, white steed, neither friend, foe nor enraged dragon could prevent this gallant gentleman from reaching his heart's desire, his lady fair awaits his imminent arrival, resplendent in royal red!
An absolutely enchanting, chivalrously penned romance poem, true love doth conquer all!
7 Years Ago
Amazing review with beautiful wording and so poetic. That is a poem by itself. Thank you so much gre.. read more Amazing review with beautiful wording and so poetic. That is a poem by itself. Thank you so much great poet.
Nice reach. This is a different style from what I have read from you before. Always interesting.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nice reach. This is a different style from what I have read from you before. Always interesting.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much Jon for this amazing review and appreciation. Take care my friend.
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Added on September 1, 2017
Last Updated on September 1, 2017
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