Redamancy

Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil

Romance and beauty

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Upon the lunar light,

I read your curved lines, 

memorizing the edges of 

beautiful shadows and

concealed paradoxes.

Upon the star light,

I payed attention to the center,

hiding in lovely masks,

donating my organs of selfless

withering to the bleeding fantasies,

releasing emotions upon the fray

of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,

ricocheting noticeably backwards,

needing inked notes and helpless blankets.

I pretended to be the eclipse between 

the two realities, allowing redamancy

to be saved by losing herself in return.

Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 

messages I received.

Upon the cloud linings...

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

to truly be able to see something from another perspective would be scary and so enlightening. you would know without a doubt that your love is received and returned in kind. to love someone so deeply that you feel that connection and think you know every curve, every angle, every tiny detail, and yet, you have a lifetime to only scratch the surface. to give yourself fully to someone else--body, heart, soul, mind--is such a gesture that we come out the other side changed..reborn...nicely written as always Sami.. your writing not only makes the reader feel, it tickles the intellect and the imagination.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh Sami! You had me floating on a cloud, almost wishing I was peeping in on you seeing your sublime words in the context of reality.

regards,
al

[Linda alexander]

An intrigue view of romance the poet trying to portrait, love and romance can have peripheral and deeper voyage of it's own, also it can be deceiving to normal viewers but in core very genuine, a different way of looking at love and romance

[MCS]

Wonderful read as always!!

[Hessy]

Lovely. Your poems are just amazing.
I love this line :Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and
messages I received.
Upon the cloud linings...

[B]

Oh how lovely Sami
Romance and love its so enchanting your view of her
and how this brings on such a light feeling to the heart and mind

[Pax]

I remember something that asking myself, how many times we lose ourselves to earned what love can bring? Despite that, its worth every losing piece of yourself to that very person. Well done on another fine piece, my good brother, i hope your well...

[Ruth]

Your pen is mighty Sami. The true essence of offering in romance is portrayed here with such amazing insight, absolutely delightful :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I'm so honored you have visited and so grateful for all you say and do. All rich blessings...:)..............................

[Bala Gorthi]

This is just out of world! To be able to ink such a beautiful work upon the cloud lining is simply unimaginable to me.
It is blissful to be reading this amazing craft. Thank you for sharing, Sir..

[Ken Simm.]

Your continued fine use of romantic language is nothing short of superb Sami. An excellent write in so many ways.