Redamancy

Redamancy............................. By Sami Khalil

Romance and beauty

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Upon the lunar light,

I read your curved lines, 

memorizing the edges of 

beautiful shadows and

concealed paradoxes.

Upon the star light,

I payed attention to the center,

hiding in lovely masks,

donating my organs of selfless

withering to the bleeding fantasies,

releasing emotions upon the fray

of memories over hallowed ashes.

The familiar looked deviant and peculiar,

ricocheting noticeably backwards,

needing inked notes and helpless blankets.

I pretended to be the eclipse between 

the two realities, allowing redamancy

to be saved by losing herself in return.

Beauty I saw, rebirth I witnessed and 

messages I received.

Upon the cloud linings...

Reviews

[Steven]

misvalued moments by the ones you share them with....

[Sami Khalil]

OMG! So true and well articulated. Thank you kindly kind sir for all. Glad to see you

[Marissa Brazzell]

Wow, i honestly don't know what to say. You are very talented, i haven't read anything this well written in a long time. What inspired you to write this lovely masterpiece?

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! How did I miss this marvelous review; my sincere apologies.
Will keep the answer anonymous if you will. Thank you kindly for sharing.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Redamancy"
sami Khalil,
"I read your curved lines
memorizing the edges of
beautiful shadows and
concealed paradoxes
upon the starlight."
The night sky is so mind boggling
that I thought this poem has
got to be in reference to it.
But then;
"I pretended to be the eclipse between
the two realities, allowing redamancy
to be saved by losing herself in return."
The moon and stars feel like love.
It's easy to fall in love with such win-
some charm. Requited and returned
to your heart.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! What a lovely review dear poet and friend. So glad you you like it. All rich blessings.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I wish the same for you Sami thanks for your kindness as well.

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Hi Sami. I've not been reading much lately so took a look at a few read requests. Wow. Your writing is always inspirational. Such a use of fine words. I really loved this.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Mad EnglishMan for this magical review and kind appreciation. So glad you like it.

[Manel]

wow i lost the words nice flow of emotions
great peace i love it

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much for the kind visit and liking. All appreciated.

[Jimmy Yetts]

So enjoyed reading this piece, I just had to do it, again.
Wonderful, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and kindness. Many blessings.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I love this poem. thanks for this wonderful poetry.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly for sharing with us your wonderful visit and summation.

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! well done sir! i love your opening 2 lines and following next three ..there is science, spiritualism and such beauty in them ..and the rest tells such a large story ..with aplomb ..this is one for the books says i! so good!
E.

[LadyAnn68]

Outstanding! Clear as a bell...what our minds can achieve, what are emotions can stand, and how are feelings can be so swayed.

[Tom]

Yes indeed Sami, when we observe the night time sky on a clear evening, those vibrant and many magnificent shiny stars fill our minds with wonderment and awe, reminding us, we too are part of the almighty kernel of creation, mesmerising poetry my friend!