Welkin's Sun

The light without, the light within...

Welkins’ Sun/…By Sami Khalil

Delightful mornings with the sun…

 

Onward riseth the fair warmth of a nestled morning sun

Tuneful to suited birds, ladled with merriment and song

Swathed in aura and radiant beams and in lumbered pace

From whence to bide new hopes aglow, and darkness shun.

 

How gracefully we walketh in heavenly abundance of light

In pure arrays without ire and not to parry thy fiery sword

Whilst frothing clouds dissipate, languishing in wanderlust

To which prim and proper upon quaint hills and deserts flight.

 

Onward riseth praise proper and yearnings for waning thrones

But those who hath an undying light in moments ascendeth high

Hearkening to knowledge of truth when days of yore weareth not

Shall inheriteth true wealth, beckoning wisdom amid milestones.

 

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami, you are gifted with the sunrise in your eyes... you speak to the autumn and winter of life... when the meaning of sunsets lie within our reach.
Beautiful poetry. truly, Pat

[SM Davis]

This is lovely. Your banter and meter have an Elizabethan feel to them. It's light, fresh, well done.

[Wandervogel]

....your usage of Shakespearean english...is wonderful...

[mercy party]

sunrise, new day. you write to the point with precision and at the same time patient and beautiful. Pro -like excellence!

[Silmara McGarry]

Delightful indeed... and the wonderful image, makes it even more enchanting!

Well doneee!!!!
;-)
Sil

[Troy Henson]

The picture is almost as exquisite as the write Sami. I welcome new days such as these....loved this one.

[E G TEN]

You are a giant amongst ants with your words Mr. K, such a pleasure reading your work every time. Each Stanza is a wonderful tribute an ode to the mighty nova, very cool, EG.

[SUGATA M]

I could clearly see a painting in the poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh my...what a glorious write this is, Sami. The painting is magnificent. Mother Nature paints quite a morning sky for those who take the time to drink it all in. A new day...filled with possibilities. So lovely. lydi**

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sami Khallil,
"Welkin's Sun" Oh take me into the common shared beauty of our glorious sun within a morning so lovely! You have waxed eloquent with your fun and lilting description of the commonality of joy we all share and enjoy of this world, our home. Heaven's masterpiece I have seen and given my heart a happy tickle of remembrace of my love of outdoors. Blessings to you Kathy