Welkin's Sun

The light without, the light within...

Welkins’ Sun/…By Sami Khalil

Delightful mornings with the sun…

 

Onward riseth the fair warmth of a nestled morning sun

Tuneful to suited birds, ladled with merriment and song

Swathed in aura and radiant beams and in lumbered pace

From whence to bide new hopes aglow, and darkness shun.

 

How gracefully we walketh in heavenly abundance of light

In pure arrays without ire and not to parry thy fiery sword

Whilst frothing clouds dissipate, languishing in wanderlust

To which prim and proper upon quaint hills and deserts flight.

 

Onward riseth praise proper and yearnings for waning thrones

But those who hath an undying light in moments ascendeth high

Hearkening to knowledge of truth when days of yore weareth not

Shall inheriteth true wealth, beckoning wisdom amid milestones.

 

Reviews

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Excellent writing as always, Sami.

I really enjoyed how you have written about both aspects of light; that in the natural world given birth from sun, and that which exists inside the soul; as love, knowledge, compassion and true morality. We can all bask in the wonders of wisdom and purity of thought and feeling if we only embrace it and share it around, just as the sun share's her warmth with all.

Another brilliant piece, my friend. Lush vocabulary and with brilliant execution. Very well done!

[Raymond Federle]

Very good! I enjoyed reading very much!

[Isabella Ivy]

I'm hooked! (Sigh) You have more like this? I want to climb inside these words and live there! I.I.

[MsJewel]

I have missed reading your amazing poetry. You never cease to amaze me. Absolutely brilliant. :) Julie

[Pax]

"there's a sun in every hearts of our humanity, to ignite it takes some good purpose."

well done, brother...

[Manasa.L]

Love the rhyming, a very deep thoughts of writing.

Amazing, the mornings have a new day for everyone

[Trace]

great rhyming patterns here, very unique in your special way of writing, very deep.

NICE, Trace

[Tiana]

So beautifully written with such wonderful imagery, Sami ... Loved it!

[emmajoy]

The exquisite painting heralds an equally colourful piece of writing - what a fine choice!

'Swathed in aura and radiant beams and in lumbered pace ~~ From whence to bide new hopes aglow, and darkness shun.'

Your phrasing and words remind me of ancient poetry, of a time when poets created life-enhancing beauty to and of emotions and surroundings. You've shared amazing visuals here, Sami - thank you.

[MOON]

Ever the bard , Sami, love the dawning and life full of promise and yet... Beautiful picture