Welkin's Sun

The light without, the light within...

Welkins’ Sun/…By Sami Khalil

Delightful mornings with the sun…

 

Onward riseth the fair warmth of a nestled morning sun

Tuneful to suited birds, ladled with merriment and song

Swathed in aura and radiant beams and in lumbered pace

From whence to bide new hopes aglow, and darkness shun.

 

How gracefully we walketh in heavenly abundance of light

In pure arrays without ire and not to parry thy fiery sword

Whilst frothing clouds dissipate, languishing in wanderlust

To which prim and proper upon quaint hills and deserts flight.

 

Onward riseth praise proper and yearnings for waning thrones

But those who hath an undying light in moments ascendeth high

Hearkening to knowledge of truth when days of yore weareth not

Shall inheriteth true wealth, beckoning wisdom amid milestones.

 

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Onward riseth the fair warmth of nestled morning sun
Tuneful tô suited birds.ladled with merriment and song.
This is my favorite part of the day. Stillness and pale lights for company, with a cup of coffee on the veranda listening to birds....
The magic of it is I get to do it again and again, thank you for painting a glorious portrait of the sun!

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you to for pointing out to the beauty of those moments and to the lovely visit. More sunshine in your life...

[Mrudula Rani]

Tô tell the truth, I love rain! Thank you.

[Munna vikram]

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[Irenic]

Its beautiful.......simply
"Onward riseth the fair warmth of a nestled morning sun
Tuneful to suited birds, ladled with merriment and song
Swathed in aura and radiant beams and in lumbered pace
From whence to bide new hopes aglow, and darkness shun."

The way you have described how sun rises on the sky and its light spreads in every nook and how birds which are flying in the sky shining sue the light of sun as if they are clothed in those lights rays is so vivid as if you have captured the picture of sunrise not from camera but from words.

"Whilst frothing clouds dissipate, languishing in wanderlust"
This line is loveeeeeeeeee
the way you have described how clouds move away as sun rise stroke at my heart

"Onward riseth praise proper and yearnings for waning thrones
But those who hath an undying light in moments ascendeth high
Hearkening to knowledge of truth when days of yore weareth not
Shall inheriteth true wealth, beckoning wisdom amid milestones."
The way you relate the sunlight to desire of achieving higher level should be appreciated.

Reading your poem is treat!!!!
Thanks for sharing:)

[Sami Khalil]

Whoee...Thank you so much talented poet and friend for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us. So glad you like it.

[Irenic]

You are welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

::::::::))))))

[Munna vikram]

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[Weeping willow]

Wow! what a beautiful write.I'm at a loss for words.
Loved it,so many splendid words describing the morning sun ;-]

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are appreciated.

[Traci]

A nice blend of vivid imagery and words that capture the beautiful essence of the photograph. With each new day we are blessed with a sunrise, light full of hope and opportunities.

[Sami Khalil]

I totally agree with your wonderful statement. Every sunrise is a hope and every day is a blessing. Thank you gracefully for all.

[Richard Layne]

What such beautiful, loud imagery. Your work is like a great broadway musical. Well done.

[Hope]

Its just great........
A really mesmerizing work...

[Sean M. Addams]

Art put to poetry a very amazing piece . Great detail in this.

[Susan 🦋]

I want to languish in wanderlust!!! Beautifully written, vivid imagery, good flow and quite an enjoyable read! :-) Thank you.

[Hebe]

Beauty of words and inspiration shines through this wonderful piece of writing.