Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[Pax]

Perfect Peaceful Solitude is what we all seek from our chaotic mind, soul or even people around us... A sound of peaceful silence, a mindful solitude, an escape to where we can relax... i wish we can go there anytime when all is chaotic in our lives... this is great my friend...

[Sami Khalil]

A portrait of Mazzy Star...

[Dhaye]

Wow! Great lines (i think for a ballad), sir. This is a beautiful song and I wish I can hear the tune.

[Sami Khalil]

A lyrical song to be sung...
Enjoy.

[Sami Khalil]

"Lady of grace
Of brigher mornings
Of mislabeled nights"

Sami Khalil