Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[Terpsichore]

Solitude is easy, just take a lone country walk at 3 am, with just the rustle of some nocturnal little creature hunting in the hedgerows; 'perfect' solitude is different and that one word in tht title entirely changed the way I read this poem.

'I want to lead in love
Keeping it low key
Where every prelude
Is a quiet rendition
To these two hearts
In perfect gratitude.' This is a quite beautiful love poem.


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[redzone]

ah Sami, you are the romantic and romantic poet... spoken like someone who knows and has felt love, who has shared "solitude" with your beloved... to have experienced this.. wonderful... and to be able to write about it, even more so..

redzone

[Diamond]

This is so soothing. Isn't it the greatest unity when solitude is shared? I love the concept of this poem because I know what that unity is. Beautifully composed.

[Tom]

Yes indeed Sami when two kindred spirits are drawn together and unite, sweet music is the only natural consequence and enthuses all around !

A deeply romantic , heart rendering and soul edifying piece of poetry!

[Troy Henson]

Hi Sam,
Hope you've been well.

I loved this. Some beautiful soft and subtle tones.

Very nice Sam!

[Indra Neil]

Beautiful composition and smooth lyrical flow! Very well composed! *claps*

[J. F. Charleston]

This makes me think about an alternate universe. One where things are different and only we ourselves can go there, but we don't want to go alone. Some would say that the alternate universe would be scary or "uncomfortable" but in all honesty it could be way better than reality. That's my take on this, and a very good story one I think many of us pander on, but never talk about. Thanks for bringing it up my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words my friend.
"I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude.."
The complete poem was wonderful. Above lines perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[1VJ]

Reads like a lovely serenade of sigh worthy sentiments. What woman wouldn't want to hear these tempting words? :) Bravo!