Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[The dark story]

Solitude is tranquility, a dimension with no chains on the passions and thoughts...where they are seen in their most truest image.
The tone of the poem is so soft and mesmerizing, yet strong enough to consume you in...into the world of Solitude it paints. The iteration of those lines makes that very impact.
Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is really good work Sami. I really like the third stanza as it describes the ways in which everything around can fade like and illusion. Its very distinguished and I also loved the fifth stanza where you musical significance as inspirations for comparison. Very refined style you have there. Keep up the good work.

[Michael X]

Wow, I like it, so much depth. You write the image.

[Pete]

Feels like there is 'Perfect Solitude' in love. This reads very beautifully - almost hypnotic or mesmerizing. It lulls you into a peaceful state where thoughts of love would indeed be welcomed. Thanks for sharing this.

[AquaWater5674]

Amazing..the tendrils of this piece..stretch out from the words...wrap around your heart...and invite the
Reader on a romantic...hallowed train of thought..
Our inner sanctuary..
So Beautiful, Lyrical and masterfull..
My favorite lines
"Lady of Grace..of brighter mornings, of mislabeled nights..
Ahh..like bieng fed
The Nectar of the Writing God's
Beautiful
Debbie

[Tony Jordan]

I got the feeling of early Dylan (Bob not Thomas) - e.g. Lay Lady Lay.
Soft acoustic finger picked - James Taylor even.
I would like to hear you perform it. Excellent refrain too Sami Khalil

[Black Cat Fever]

This has a very soft, mesmerizing and enchanted feeling. It has a lulling flow to it. Very romantic and tender. It would make such a wonderful spellbinding song.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

sami khalil,
Motivated to preserve and enfold love's strength within the structure of relationship. How beautiful-powerful! Wonderful poem. Blessings Kathy

[Deandra Dawn]

I love this! The last two stanzas were my absolute favorite. I admire every word choice and the flow was smooth and continuous. Great job!

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The song of tranquility in the solitude of love. Gorgeous write, Sami!