Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[kitty]

A thing you cant buy! A precious thing that's so rare..yet appreciated by those who enjoy it. Enchanting it can be and envigorating. Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you so much Kitty for all. God bless...

[kitty]

Blessings to you too. We can be inspired - in solitude.

[Sami Khalil]

:)............

[BlackPrince]

Solitude is one aspect of life and state of mind I've learnt to appreciate aver the years.
Being able to relax, meditate and reflect in silence away from the madding crowd is a good discipline we should all exercise in our life, as part of our soul-search and being in touch with our inner and deeper self; that way we'll gain insight and earn the patience skill to also be able to appreciate and deeply getting to know others.

WELL DONE!

[Sami Khalil]

I totally agree BalckPrince. So true and well said. Thank you so much. God bless.

[Mrudula Rani]

Your perfect solitude is so tempting, and your invitation is irresistible !

[Sami Khalil]

Irritable or irresistible. Check your meaning. Irritable is negative.

[Mrudula Rani]

Sorry, my IPad has two languages and some times what words it pops up I am not sure. I should be more watchful before I hit post comment !

[Sami Khalil]

:)................

[lightsong]

I feel this more to be a chorale, a prayer song with all the voieces, hands and hearts pleading to God, to the Lady of grace, Virigin Mary, I feel peace and tranquility spreading through Your words.

[Sami Khalil]

My goodness. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kindness. You are appreciated.

[lightsong]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

::::::)))))))))

[peter Duggan]

Very beautiful poem Sami. When it comes to solitude I can relate to what you say. I am up each morning before Before Four. so that I can have three or four hours by myself. Most get loneliness mixed up with aloneness, but there is a difference. I really enjoyed your lyrics, my friend....peter

[Sami Khalil]

I truly agree and i Love your separation between the two. One is needed and refreshing in a positive way and the other is negative and alienating. I appreciate you, Peter.

[Weeping willow]

Solitude is a place of bliss in this life filled with noise,lovely write;-]

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well articulated. Lovey visit. Thank you so much.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Sometimes I do need to be alone. People don't understand it, they call me funny acting, oh well, i'll be that.

[Sami Khalil]

All understandable. Thank you dear poet for this lovely visit.

[Traci]

Beautiful lyrics, Sami. Love is felt and shared bringing us to that place of perfect solitude. Favorited.

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well articulated. I do agree. Thank you so much Traci for all.

[Ardra]

I want to invite you
When you are comfortable
To my perfect solitude
To my perfect solitude...

:) i can see the person sing this song ..nice lyrics..

[Neville]

Cor, how wonderful was that eh? A perfect blend comprised of equal parts mind, body & spirit. I have been away far too long old friend...All Good Things, N