Luna

Speaking of romance...The Moon is that silent sailor...

Luna………………By Sami Khalil

Speaking of romance…

The Poem:

Speaking of…

That silent sailor

Sailing upon dark notes

Owing its debt to the sun

Beaming in complexions of castaways

Slitting darkness till the last border lines

When the serene wheels of dawn prayers turn.

 

Speaking of…

The only progeny

To the first virgin mother

Land of eventual wanderings

Fusing waves of textured people

To colors of clay and clod belongings

Where anthems translate patois of flooded stragglers.

 

Speaking of…

This petticoat companion

That night ferry in the inky sky

Languishing in cardered memories

Of travelers clad in restive seasons

Under the silvery shafts of starry lights

Where the ticking clock on the horizon kindles images.

 

Speaking of…

Those who are cleaved between the heart and the moon.

Reviews

[Beccy]

This is exquisite. The gentleness of tone and the way the words flow have a timeless, classic feel. This could have been written two hundred years ago by one of the great English Romantics. The last full stanza in particular is absolutely stand out in my opinion.

Beccy.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. You are appreciated...:)...........

[Penny]

My pleasure truly.

[Sami Khalil]

:)..................

[misha]

What beautiful imagery! !!!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Misha for all you say and do. All rich blessings....:)...................

[misha]

You are welcome :-)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[Zakari Schmidt]

Damn this is breathtaking man, the last line was perfect. What a great write, I'm so glad I read

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Zachary for this wonderful review and kind words. You are appreciated...:).............

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... the cleavage of dreaming
between your heart and the moon...
tucked in blissful romantic overtures
of Chopin rhapsodies ... truly
enchanting ... Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Patricia for this wonderful review and kind appreciation. Be blessed...:).............

[willweb]

"Those who are cleaved between the heart and the moon" What beautiful line to wrap up and even more beautiful poem. This i filled with love. I really enjoyed this today.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this awesome review . All rich blessings...:).............

[Sanober]

Wow...your poetry has such a magical quality. It is something else entirely. Your words carry me to timeless, spaceless realms. And that is exactly what I seek when I read. This is infused with the deep blue mysteriousness of the sea and the moon. A pleasure to read!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:)........

[Prabha Salimath]

Speaking of…
That silent sailor
Sailing upon dark notes
Owing its debt to the sun
Beaming in complexions of
castaways
Slitting darkness till the last
border lines
When the serene wheels of
dawn prayers turn.
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These lines OMG made me picture the moon, still hot sun is over my head I love this poem just spectacular.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...Be blessed....:)........

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

:).............

[Diana]

"Speaking of"...a great poem. I get the feeling of division between moon and earth, some are divided. You really captured the mystical tone of la "Luna."

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly dear poet for this lovely review and kind words. So thrilled you like it...:)......

[jennifer little]

nice poem i enjoyed reading it keep up the good work ..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review. Be blessed...:)......

[Latifa]

oh my God, I loved it so much , your talent shines in this pasterpiece, I shall remember this for a long time.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Latifa for all your support and appreciation. I'm thrilled by all...:)......

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮You never disappoint, Sami. So glad I finally got to this poem. The title caught my attention due to the fact that some of my friends actually refer to me as Luna. I really, really enjoyed this. Especially the lines,

Land of eventual wanderings
Fusing waves of textured people

Great work. ^-^╰☆╮

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So glad to know that about you and appreciate. I'm so thrilled you like this write and that you have visited...All rich blessings...:)............