My brother & dear friend, Sami, Sometimes I think your mind always transcends every time you penned a piece such as this one. I could say that it taken me a long time to finally put words upon reading this few many times every time I came to visit your words in your poetry.
This piece leads me to think that our written words are our legacy… it’s our creation, devotion to the language of the heart & mind – and most specially the soul. On our writes we transcend from mind to mind of the other person to person as it rooted to their mind unto the other, as if like a chain of events to be remember as ‘US’, spreading our words like rapid fire for the world to envision what we see within us and what we observe, read, heard & experienced about life. A philosophy that is rooted deep and grows in blooms beautifully in the minds who have touch by its beauty and thinking grace…
“the more we gaze, the more they do reveal”
That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale to see the depths of the soul its representing… like how we imagine the star, how it gleams our hope into unimaginable depths of the universe, like we transcends beyond the human mind capabilities…
Sigh… brother, you did it, I feel like I lost myself into thinking more, than what it already is…
Excellent!
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"That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale t.. read more"That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale to see the depths of the soul its representing… like how we imagine the star, how it gleams our hope into unimaginable depths of the universe, like we transcends beyond the human mind capabilities… "
Wow. I'm blown away by the power and reach of your intellect and wisdom. I'm still cherishing and enjoying your marvelous words. You are like a surgeon of accurate diagnosis and healing. A guru of sorts too in spiritual matters. Thank you so much dearest friend and brother...:)...............................
If we have dreams we can do almost anything. We need to have those who believe in u and anything really can happen. An inspiring poem and very impressive too.
Leave a legacy and you will live forever in their hearts...
What makes people remember us? Would they still utter our names or mention how we live? Or can they recite even a line of our poetry, a quote we stated, or a word we had emphasized in our writings?
Or will we be remembered because of the beautiful things we have done while we live?
There are only two ways to be remembered by people: be the best or be the worst.
Yes, legacy is more important than self-preservation..and it only means an unselfish deed or thinking.
Thank you for this philosophical piece. This is magnificent!
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"Yes, legacy is more important than self-preservation..and it only means an unselfish deed or thinki.. read more"Yes, legacy is more important than self-preservation..and it only means an unselfish deed or thinking."
Wow. That is what I'm talking about dear poet and you have summed it up marvelously. I'm so thrilled you have visited and shared...Take care...:)..................................
You become what you believe...in it's chasm. I believe that. Where fate is the auctioneer. Interesting line!
Lovely poem! keep up the good work!
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Wow. Thank you so much Honey-Bee for this amazing review and liking. All rich blessings...:).......... read moreWow. Thank you so much Honey-Bee for this amazing review and liking. All rich blessings...:)............................
Shakespeare said "All the world's a stage...", this poem says to me "All the universe is a stage...". It's like a synopsis of my past 100 years. Deep...
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Wow. What a wonderful perspective and summation, sir. All rich blessings...:).....
What would be my legacy. Don't you have to be dead for that? Think I'll wait awhile
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Hahaha. Even if you are dead dear poet you still live on in hearts and minds or even curses...lolread moreHahaha. Even if you are dead dear poet you still live on in hearts and minds or even curses...lol
Many and many thank yous for all. As for me you are a hero...:)........................
A well thought out solid write. I really liked your word choices for this one. Engaging from beginning to end. Well done poet! ;)
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Wow. Thank you so much dear Tara for this wonderful review and encouragement. All rich blessings...:.. read moreWow. Thank you so much dear Tara for this wonderful review and encouragement. All rich blessings...:)..........................
My brother & dear friend, Sami, Sometimes I think your mind always transcends every time you penned a piece such as this one. I could say that it taken me a long time to finally put words upon reading this few many times every time I came to visit your words in your poetry.
This piece leads me to think that our written words are our legacy… it’s our creation, devotion to the language of the heart & mind – and most specially the soul. On our writes we transcend from mind to mind of the other person to person as it rooted to their mind unto the other, as if like a chain of events to be remember as ‘US’, spreading our words like rapid fire for the world to envision what we see within us and what we observe, read, heard & experienced about life. A philosophy that is rooted deep and grows in blooms beautifully in the minds who have touch by its beauty and thinking grace…
“the more we gaze, the more they do reveal”
That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale to see the depths of the soul its representing… like how we imagine the star, how it gleams our hope into unimaginable depths of the universe, like we transcends beyond the human mind capabilities…
Sigh… brother, you did it, I feel like I lost myself into thinking more, than what it already is…
Excellent!
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
"That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale t.. read more"That’s what poetry is, written to read many times as our imagination stretches into wider scale to see the depths of the soul its representing… like how we imagine the star, how it gleams our hope into unimaginable depths of the universe, like we transcends beyond the human mind capabilities… "
Wow. I'm blown away by the power and reach of your intellect and wisdom. I'm still cherishing and enjoying your marvelous words. You are like a surgeon of accurate diagnosis and healing. A guru of sorts too in spiritual matters. Thank you so much dearest friend and brother...:)...............................
Wow Sami...I am blown away by the depth of your words...
so many lines in this well written poem spoke to me
For there is a magic behind every mystery
And legacy, leaning on the shoulders
Of darkness and the shadows of hope,
Until the time and place of awakening
This is so insightful, uplifting and thought provoking at the same time. You have penned a masterpiece my friend. Brilliant.
:) Julie
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10 Years Ago
Wow. I,m blown away too by your talent and inspiration to us all. I,m.so pleased you like this write.. read moreWow. I,m blown away too by your talent and inspiration to us all. I,m.so pleased you like this write and the message. Be blessed...:)..........
Yes, we change "the old ways," every generation has their shot at it. Some generations do it pretty much correctly, but never perfect. We are where we are in today's latest change. It does not look good. And what makes it look even worse is a new generation is about to began to do their thing. I can only wonder if they can possibly understand what the hell their are up against. I fear they do not.
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Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and keen insights. You have graced me with a.. read moreWow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and keen insights. You have graced me with all...:)..................
I like how you begin this poem... "
"Time moves in tireless steps,
In sequels of eulogy, faceless,
As it chases the reign of kings and queens." Right off the bat, you have use thinking about who we are, what can we be and become, what have we done... philosophical inquiries that have filled human minds since we first made language... I also like the idea of, " there is magic in every mystery", I think with the horrors in the world, the pace of everyone out for themselves, we have lost sight of and the feel of such "magic" and as a result, have no idea how to uncover "mystery"..
But then we have poets and poetry and especially this "magical" poem of yours Sami... is there "legacy" here??? I believe there is Sami... thank you for this..
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Wow. Thank you so much Redzone for this amazing review and truthful words. You have enriched us with.. read moreWow. Thank you so much Redzone for this amazing review and truthful words. You have enriched us with your insights and humanity. I can't thank you enough for all...:)..................