Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[Jamil Isimbabi]

love.This explains true love, when you are with someone you love sometimes you both don't speak you just stare at each other and it seems like you're speaking. A beautiful feeling and connection captured and reflected here by such a good poem

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well spoken. I'm so glad you have visited and shared...Have a great one...:)...........

[Johnson Bobby]

Very beautiful love can grow mature flourish
Express yourself words can be a kiss if let
Them be,!



I like writing love poems to.

Johnsonbobby

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So thankful for this lovely review and kind words. I'm so pleased you like it and this genre...Be blessed...:)........................

[Shaquana Adams]

Aww! That ending was perfectly romantic. The way I read it, I couldn't automatically tell where you were going and then when I got to the end, it was just wow.
-QuanaWana

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and liking. So honored you have visited...:)..........

[TL Boehm]

Long before the winnowing
Of the wind across soul-scented
Barns and old plowed fields…
the atmosphere in this piece is simply lovely.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this amazing review and kind words. I'm pleased you like it...Take care...:)........................

[Black Cat Fever]

Very creative and skillfully done. So romantic. A wonderful love poem.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. So glad you like it. Take care...:)...................

[Black Cat Fever]

You are most welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[emmajoy]

If its accompanying illustration shows an Italian scene, a poem just has to be romantic, Sami! And, you don't disappoint: what sweet words, what passionately though discreetly expressed phrases in this post.. tis lovely, truly. No sure of this line - 'Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,'

Thank you so much for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Emma for this lovely review and kind words. I love anything Italian and it shows. So glad you have visited after a hiatus and shared...Be blessed...:)......................

[Zahra]

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,
With poignant looks at life and laughter.
Long before roots remember
soil’s drifted fragrances,

this is truly exquisite. well penned.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear Zahra for this amazing review and appreciation. I'm pleased by all...:).............................

[SingPoetically]

The softness in the poem makes it beautiful and sensual great write of romance

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and soft words. Many rich blessings...:)......................

[Norah]

What a wonderful,sweet, and poignant poem this is. Great write!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Norah for the lovely review and sweet appreciation. I'm honored by all...Take care...:)...................

[Joe_VILOT_]

A dreams eloquent requiem for the unseen a vision of love unbound well the rest takes you and her through time and space.
If this is about someone you loved and are for searching for or are still love her i wish you finally find her through dreams as well.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. A wonderful review indeed Joe. Your words are so poetic and lovely. All rich blessings...:).........................

[Joe_VILOT_]

thank ya'
Amiego.......
What went through your mind when writing this?

And your poem/ art work/ work of art was delightful indeed O)
Cheers out and over joe

[Sami Khalil]

My love for her off course and also the longing for the old country. Thank you kindly for all...:)............