Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[Peacegal]

This is soo romantic and the paintings are beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Hostyn.

[Peacegal]

It's true:)

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you again....:).............

[NeiL ArandA]

You captured again with your words those special moments when two souls are inlove head over heels with each other . The world seems to have stood still .Nothing moves no one matters . Its like the universe revolves around them and they are the center of the world .Love indeed is such a mystifying feeling . Excellent expression of words .

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated dear poet. You have the grasp and the insights. Many rich blessings...

[NeiL ArandA]

My pleasure ...

[Sami Khalil]

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[Sami Khalil]

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[Hitchhiker]

Had to look up plectrums. Now I know. "Long before . . ." A leading statement, which in this case, is instrumental in allowing the reader to connect to the next line of thought. Enjoyed immensely.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind gestures. All appreciated...:).........

[B.J]

Oh! wonderfully done I enjoyed reading your poem

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Barb for the gracious review and kind words. I'm pleased...:)..........

[B.J]

you're welcome

[Sami Khalil]

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[Joe Malgeri]

The poem "Aware" is absolutely Great!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Joe for this great review and lovely visit. I'm honored by all...:)..........................

[Penlady]

You are a poet sir! Amazing lovespeak!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly Penlady. All appreciated...:).....................

[Anne Lyons]

This is absolutely beautiful and well-written. Very engaging!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Anne for this engaging review and lovely words. You have graced me with all...Take care...:)........................

[Mari K]

Wow I need a love like this!! How romantic and timeless this is. what a very lucky lady she is to receive a work this awesome.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. She is indeed. I'm also lucky to have great friends and wonderful writers like yourself...Have a great one...:)...................

[Shekinah2015]

Beautiful, stunning poem. I've seen so many cliche love letters. This is so unique. Great job!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Victoria for this lovely review and kind words. All appreciated...:)......................

[TheKratiMittal]

Oh My God,Sami!
You do it every time.
Every word marks the traits of true love.
The one who's got you,must be so lucky!
A lovely love-letter.
Every word melts into a thousand feelings.
Keep sharing!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for the lovely review and kind sharing. I will. Many rich blessings...:).....................