Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[zainul]

I remember and repeat the wonderful verses long after I recited.
Extraordinary,superb and dazzling ode to love.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this dazzling review and kind words. I'm honored when you visit. Many rich blessings...:)..........

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for giving us a reason to appreciate classical love.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^:)..........

[MagicAl]

I always love how deep and meaningful your poems are, and this one didn't disappoint. Another great write Sami... very emotive.. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this magical review and kind words. I'm honored indeed...Take care...:)....................

[Ayushi]

Deep love that could be a bliss for anyone..
Another lovely and powerful write ..
Beautiful line
"Even instruments knowing their plectrums;" ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Ayushi for this wonderful review and appreciation. You have honored me by your visit. Take care...:)....................

[I. Wright]

I am in awe of this poem's depth and sheer eloquence. I'm packing up my words now and leaving this site. I do not belong here next to this. "Soul-scented". Absolutely beautiful. Bravo.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You belong and you deserve to be. I appreciate you and your appreciation to this write. I'm so delighted you like the depth and sheer eloquence of this poem...Be blessed...:)..................

[Troy Henson]

Great imagery tone and flow my friend. Just a wonderful, powerful write by you.

Troy

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and kind words...I'm pleased that you like this write...:)..................

[escherflight]

the winnowing
Of the wind across soul-scented
Barns and old plowed fields…

Oh the nostalgic melancholy in these lines, like Tennyson. What a sensual, yearning in this poem...emotive.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and comparison. I'm grateful for all...:)..................

[maria ( rose)]

BRAVO!!! Sami. I'm feeling this one...excellent my friend!!!♥

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear friend for this lovely review and time. Honored indeed...:).....

[maria ( rose)]

always a pleasure my friend;

[Sami Khalil]

:)................

[Edward Lancheister]

excellent written, expression of romance

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Edward for this lovely review and visit. All appreciated...:).....................

[John Ryan]

wonderfully penned and romantic piece Sami.

A nice read

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much John for this marvelous review and appreciation. All rich blessings...:).......................

[Valentine]

Sweet and very romantic, love the pictures too. Kathie

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Valentine for this lovely review and kind words. So glad you like it friend. All rich blessings...:)......................