Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Long before time itself began you were her lover Sami. Her being womankind. Beautiful writing no chara

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true andwell articulated. Glad you like this romantic write. Take care...:)....

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... "long before the winnowing of the wind"
is a lovely caress of poetry. Your poem and the art
Is delicious like berries and ice cream. So romantic
and to be savored. truly... Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So glad you could enjoy and taste this treat. I'm honored when you visit. Be blessed...:).........

[Day Dreamer]

Master of poets. Awesome love poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You humble me by your lovely review and appreciation. You are too in your own right. Be blessed...:).....

[Day Dreamer]

:-) the pleasure is all mine.

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[Pax]

you painted love as if merely breathing...
a love that keeps on blooming,
a muse who's always there, loving, caring for both hearts...
beautiful piece, my brother :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated. You have graced me with your lovely visit and famed intellect. Thank you dearly brother....:)........

[Wynter Ignatius]

I always enjoy other's views on romance and love in general as we all paint different pictures with our words. Wonderful to see what you have done here, so please, keep it up.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. Muchas Gracias...:).......

[M.A.Rathore]

Yes This seems a nice poem in all its form and style. It is different piece and written in a worthy style...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. You are worthy in my book. Have a great one...:)..................

[M.A.Rathore]

As for as my real comment is concerned I have go again for detailed description and some edit with the same idea and words .....if you like to do with...Sami Sahab.

[Sami Khalil]

No sir, but thanks. I appreciate it though. Not concerned when my work is done for it is the original. Take care.

[M.A.Rathore]

Yes yes It's ok...good keep it up...

[MomzillaNC]

"Long before the star's dim flicker." I love this line. You're imagery here is sensual and enticing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. All appreciated...:)...........................

[MomzillaNC]

You're very welcome. I'm in a delicate romance kind of mood after finishing "The Dance Plays On…" and this seems to carry on with that mood.

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[M]

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,
With poignant looks at life and laughter.
Dancing with vim and vigor,
Long before star’s dim flicker. Those 2 sentence are gorgeous.OMG KEEP IT UP.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Mai. I'm so grateful for the lovely visit and review. Makes me want to push myself more. Grazie mille...:)............

[M]

Benvenuto! My pleasure :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)..................

[Wórdsmíth]

Loved the colors (words) you`ve painted the pic. (poem) with. Nice imagery!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much John for this wonderful review and kind words. So glad you like it...:).............