Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[~]

I am happy I read this one! It filled my heart with giddiness. Beautiful! Just beautiful!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I'm happy you visited. Thank you so much for all...:).......

[~]

welcome Sami :):)

[Sami Khalil]

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[Ana B.]

Absolutely stunning writing.....awakening the romance in our hearts!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. I'm thrilled you like it...:).....

[Ana B.]

Anytime :) I enjoyed stopping by.

[Sami Khalil]

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[Penny]

Not the usual love song but still a very romantic piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:)....

[Penny]

My pleasure as always.

[Sami Khalil]

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[The Black Warrior]

hehehehe This is very sweet and gentle Sami...very much beautiful :D

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:)....

[The Black Warrior]

There is no need to thank me dear, thank you for sharing such wonderful work :D

[Sami Khalil]

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[Lizardo]

I really don't have much to say about this poem becuase it's truely beautiful
Sami, You captured a whole scene of love in this poem, Really great writing!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Lizardo for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated too...:).....

[Lizardo]

You are welcome Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

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[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Wow I really like this piece. The lingo is simply divine and so are the pieces of artwork shown here to spice up the poem and give a sort of imagery. I must say that this is an amazing work of art here.
I especially loved the lines that say," Dancing with vim and vigor, Long before stars' dim flicker, And leaves that wither.
Job well done my friend. Keep up the good work and may you continue to be inspired.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. Happy New Year to you and yours...:).....

[Jimmy Yetts]

Your love poems are undeniably exceptional--uniquely lovely, mellow as a dream, and soul-gratifying.
Dynamite, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated as well...:)........

[Confuser]

I'm trying to correct the points to 100 - hope this works.

[Sami Khalil]

Many and many thank yous...:).....

[Confuser]

You are welcome. Just brilliant writing. Love it.

[Confuser]

Brilliant! In my library. If I were to quote, it would be every line, what a marvel. What a wonderful writer you are. Thank you so much Sami. Just simply beautiful.

[Confuser]

Sorry, don't know how to correct, the 10 points - should be 100 - ad, google is interfering with reading and typing.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. What a marvelous review from a marvelous poet and friend. Just the visit is rnough. For I don't csre about points and ratings and stuff. Don't know how to do it either. Like most of us here on the cafe, we just do it for the love of poetry, sharing and such. Best wishes for the new years....:).....

[Stella Armour]

This is my kind of poetry Sami.. just gorgeous my friend..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Stella for this wonderful review and kind visit. All appreciated...:)..............