Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. So beautiful and wonderful my friend.
"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
I loved you! "
This is a classic and thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and appreciation. An honor indeed coming from you. ..::::)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem and was my honor to read my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

:::::))))))).......

[MadalaJose]

The poem talks to me of an unconditional love, a love that has remained strong in varying circumstances. Beautiful

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much dear poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are appreciated. ....:)......

[Mitali Shah]

Sounds like an melody of a song Sami. Love makes you visit all the new, unknown and divine places. Good one

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much beloved poet for all...:)......

[Mitali Shah]

your welcome Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...........

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A great awakening, knowing the infinity of soul love and forever's grace. Quite melodic, the music of your pen...dreamy!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated dear poet. Thank you so much for all. Have a great one...:)....

[sereenaoutloud]

So beautiful and so beautifully written!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and appreciation. All appreciated...:)...

[Jamie S.]

Love this touching piece, reminds me of the early years with my husband :) I love poetry that makes my heart smile and this one does it!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated...:). .

[Shane Mohamed]

Lovely. All of my senses danced as I read it. Beautiful description of nature. I felt the passion and love, and by the way, for the first time for me, the paintings actually gave an aura to the piece. You're a true poet of love; an honest ambassador!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love that. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. You are appreciated...:)...........

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Beauty in your words with images that compliment and bring hope.
Wonderful love poem.
Truly sweet.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Josie for this enchanting and sweet review. So glad you like it...:).........

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome--always!

[Sami Khalil]

:).................

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem about love.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. Thank you so much for all...:).....

[Kasey Miriam]

I love how this poem rolls off the tongue. Very well structured and beautiful word choice

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. Grazie mille...:)......

[Kasey Miriam]

You're very welcome Sami. It's always a pleasure.

[Sami Khalil]

:)................