Aware

A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:

Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow… even when it Snows… the Wind knows … that I am caught in a Storm of Desire…. Perfect poetry… Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! I love it. It stirred up your desires steadfastly so. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts on this poem. See you soon, in a storm or without.

[Steven]

is this a thought on timelines if romance and dreams happened in the same part of the mind?

[Sami Khalil]

Good question; I have to ponder on that. Thank you kindly sir for sharing your thoughts and questions with us.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami… after so many years.. this Poem and Art is my favorite writing of yours… Delicious as Strawberry Pie in the Sky. tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do! A pleasure to know and get your thoughts on this romantic poem. Glad to know. All rich things may come your way.

[Abla-vi Dzifa Akakpo]

Aww! I'm in love with the poem already. Nice.

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy! Thank you so much Abla for this marvelous visit.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... our poetry site brought up your poem "Aware"
that you penned four years ago. It is a Classic and even
Mozart is composing an Opera of your verse. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa! Thank you so much Patricia Wedel for discovering this poem and for liking and sharing. You are honored.

[andrew mitchell]

Elegantly said Sami well written and with flair!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are appreciated.

[lightsong]

OH!! SO profoundly beautiful! a love through times, a love from the past, till now, will go on... an ancient love that will last for eternity, all are captured, all are awakened and You are aware of it all... with a gaze to her eyes, this reminds me with something I also wrote about, beautiful my friend, beautiful in the deep thoughts You've expressed in a loving poetic way.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much beloved poet and friend for this wonderful review and appreciation. You are truly amazing.

[Minnie]

The words come to life off of the page. Love story meets classics.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So thankful to you dear poet for this lovely review and kindness. Take care...:).................

[Tabby Mac]

I love this piece! I love the voice of the poem. It speaks of love before it becomes intentional. Love often starts out as a compelling and natural action. Long term love is work, passion, and dedication. But beginning love for me is always looked upon as fresh and easy! All stages of love are amazing but this piece spoke of the beginning sweetness when it's first ripe!
Love it!
Tabby

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well articulated. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. All rich blessings...:)..............

[MCS]

Heartwarmingly beautiful!!
I always enjoy your image selection.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much MCS for this lovely review and kindness. All appreciated...:).......