Bereft

Bereft: Then pen on... Note: The first line is part of a line I left Johanna on one of her poems and she liked it a lot. It gave me the inspiration to write this one...

 

 

 

Bereft/………………By Sami Khalil

Bereft: Pen on…

The Poem:

 

Bereft…Then pen on till the next storms of life

Heralding wind, rain, hail, sand upon terrains

Pen till ink spills out with blood, become lovers

Across somber passages, brushstroke of pains.

 

From there, earth rises to meet heavenly lights

Betwixt the lands of tremor, seas of tranquility

As soul’s canvases spell out answers to quandaries

Poet’s texts answer genesis of addled humanity.

 

Pen on till starry dust fills emptiness of dark rooms

Tracing queued walls of the heart… edgeless spaces

Embrace aching words carrying rippling worlds within

For when all crumbles, hearts compose new places.

 

 

Reviews

[Corset]

good advice all, pen on, when the light is fading, when your mind, body and soul is breaking, all is poetry, not just the happy happy joy joy to the world stuff, every single line is an emotion all our own, that's ours, and we don't need no stinking punctuation, cause we KNOW what we are trying to say, and we are saying it only for ourselves, if other relate, thats beautiful, but poets write, the good ,the bad and the ugly :P

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you wonderful poet for this amazing review and sharp insights. You have summed it up marvelously. Pen on to greatness. Thank you so much ...:)........................

[Madison O'Dwyer]

This is a simply beautiful piece - perfect. I cannot say anymore than that, I'm simply wordless in awe.
Thank you for writing and sharing this :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow.I'm loving your visit and review too. I can't thank you enough for the honor...Have a great one...:)...................

[ron]

May the ink in your pen never dry of wondrous emotions that fill the pages that you revel to us.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you dear poet for this lovely prayer. May you always bless us too with your talent and kindness...Thank you for all...:).......................

[ron]

I will endeavor to do so.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:0.....................

[emmajoy]

'.. edgeless spaces ~ Embrace aching words .. ' the world and its spot of place indiviudals stand in contain so much hurt, that we need - as you are, to be aware, to share time and regret and make both brighter, lighter and more everything humanly possible. Perhaps? Smooth as silk, this post, Sami, no battling with words, no nudging into corners, just beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for your lovely review and sharing. Your words echo the truth about poets and humanity. Thank you kindly...:)...............

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Pen on till time ends itself and surrenders to infinity...brilliant...Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well spoken. No end to the poet's writings and creativity. I appreciate your time and effort...Have a great one...:)..........

[Miss Marlette]

What do I say. I am glad I read this poem. It opens me to new dimensions in poetry.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love that. I'm so glad this one inspired you in a good way. You have graced me with all...Have a great one...:)..........

[AYVID N]

"Pen on till starry dust fills emptiness of dark rooms

Tracing queued walls of the heart… edgeless spaces

Embrace aching words carrying rippling worlds within

For when all crumble, hearts compose new places."


In these few lines I find the entire essence of a poetic soul that you are. Standing ovations from me. Pen on...and on and on...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Standing ovation from me too for your wonderful and great writes. I appreciate it all...Have a great one...:)......................

[AYVID N]

Thank you. You have a wonderful evening too :)

[Sami Khalil]

You too. Always welcome...:).................

[AYVID N]

"Pen till ink spills out with blood, become lovers
Across somber passages, brushstroke of pains."

I am lost for words. Just too beautiful and unforgettable. A 100 no a 1000 diamond studded pens coming your way great, amazing poet.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are amazing too dear poet along with your writes. So glad you like it. I'm blessed to have good friends like yourself...:).............

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome and it is always a pleasure and a privilege to have the opportunity to comment on your writing.

[Sami Khalil]

Same with me...Grazie Mille...:)....................