We are more than four letters.

I was playing around with this idea. Tell me if you caught what I did and what I should do: add more? reword some thing? if so, what? etc. etc.

I don’t think you understand the extent of my

Love for you. Love is just a word, but my feelings spread

Oh so much farther than just those four little letters. Just like the

Vascular system of the human body, we circulate about

Each other; breathing, stabilizing each other.

You are literally what has kept me alive as long as I have. Let us grow

Old together, so we can live to the day to have only each other and our memories.

Until I breathe my last breath; I want all my sighs to be from our more than love.

 

-S.L.S.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"You are literally what has kept me alive as long as I have. Let us grow
Old together, so we can live to the day to have only each other and our memories."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A. Amos]

Love the title and the content of your poetry was great...