My Weakness

My Weakness

A Poem by Samantha Lynn
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yet again, this is just a bunch of thoughts in my head. I really should try more with my poetry but Idk if it is worth it? Thoughts?? idk lol

"

Crying is a weakness

and for a super hero to stay strong,

the villains mustn’t know this secret.

The voices in my head tell me

to give in to the want of tears,

but I will not.

I will not be weak.

I wasn’t born to be weak,

And no amount of

Deaths,

Heartbreaks,

Depression,

Anxiety,

or Suicide attempts

will make me do so

Because if I have learned anything in my life,

it is that crying does nothing but push you down.

That is what the voices want of me.

They want my weakness to overcome my body.

They want me to give in,

but I am just sick and tired

of the voices in my head winning.

I will not let them win.

I am done breaking

and I will show these voices that they are not the winners.

I am the hero of this story I call my own

and I am determined to prove this. 


S.L.S.  

© 2013 Samantha Lynn


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"I am the hero of this story I call my own
and I am determined to prove this. "
Tears mean you are alive. I like the energy and drive in the poem. Good to have confident and fearless in life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"I am the hero of this story I call my own
and I am determined to prove this. "
Tears mean you are alive. I like the energy and drive in the poem. Good to have confident and fearless in life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have the passion, you have the honesty. If you love to blend thoughts and emotions and present them in words please continue to try and to seek and to develop your poetic voice. In time you will know if it is worth it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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